Question

最近，你看到某英文報(bào)社正在征集主題為“如何才能成為受人歡迎的學(xué)生”的短文，對(duì)此你很感興趣。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示談?wù)勛约旱南敕�，給該報(bào)社投稿。
要點(diǎn)提示：
1、衣著干凈、整齊，保持微笑
2、誠(chéng)實(shí)，樂(lè)于助人
3、懂得與人合作
4、其他
注意：
　�、僭~數(shù)120左右；②文章的標(biāo)題和開頭已為你寫好，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
How to be popular?
　　Most students would like to be popular with their classmates, but what is the secret to achieve popularity?

Answer 1

How to be popular?
　　Most people would like to be popular with others,  but what is the secret to achieve popularity?  In fact, it is very simple.
　　The first step is to improve our appearance. We should always make sure that we dress well and smile warmly.
In this way people will surely be impressed by our confidence. Another important step is to build our character. We should always be honest and willing to help others whenever it is necessary. It’s also important to put others first. If we know how to work and get on well with others, then people will feel comfortable enough to trust us.
　　I am sure we’ll be popular with others if we can do all of the above.

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱類作文，請(qǐng)你以主題為“如何才能成為受人歡迎的學(xué)生”的短文向報(bào)社投稿。題目中給出了提綱，但是具體的要點(diǎn)要考生自己發(fā)揮，這就增加了難度，要結(jié)合提綱列出要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，再用適當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)，寫作的時(shí)候要把所有的提綱都包括在內(nèi)，不要遺漏。同時(shí)注意使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，倒裝句等不同的句式，讓文章充滿變化，不要那么的死板。同時(shí)要使用高級(jí)的詞匯和詞組提高文章的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】The first step is to improve our appearance. 這句話是不定式做表語(yǔ)，We should always make sure that we dress well and smile warmly. 這句話用了make sure和that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句， In this way people will surely be impressed by our confidence. 這句話用了詞組be impressed by， We should always be honest and willing to help others whenever it is necessary.這句話個(gè)了不定式做定語(yǔ)和讓步狀語(yǔ)從句， It’s also important to put others first. 這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)，If we know how to work and get on well with others, then people will feel comfortable enough to trust us. 這句話用了條件狀語(yǔ)從句，不定式。