Question

你叫李華，是一名高中生。你的美國(guó)筆友提姆（Tim）發(fā)來(lái)電子郵件，詢問(wèn)你在周末都做什么事。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示，請(qǐng)給提姆回一封電子郵件。
1. 大部分時(shí)間用來(lái)做功課；
2. 周日下午和朋友去體育場(chǎng)打籃球；
3. 有時(shí)和父母一起去看望爺爺奶奶；
4. 其他活動(dòng)。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)120-150；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

Answer 1

Dear Tim,
Thank you for your e-mail. Let me tell what I do at weekends.
On Saturdays, I spend most of my time doing my homework at home. If I can’t work out the problems, I have to surf the internet for answers. On Sunday afternoon, I make it a rule to play basketball with my friends in the gym near my house, which makes me relaxed. Sometimes my parents and I would like to visit my grandparents, who live in the suburb of the city. We have dinner together and chat happily.
I am fond of watching English movies, so I would like to download some English movies and watch them when I am free.
I also like to go shopping with my parents sometimes so that I can buy my favorite food.
Can you tell me how you spend your weekend?
Yours
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是書信類作文，請(qǐng)給提姆回一封電子郵件。說(shuō)明你在周末都做什么事。文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，而且很具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。在寫作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，應(yīng)用了一些較好的詞組和句子：work out 算出，be fond of doing喜歡做…，Let me tell what I do at weekends. 這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句， I make it a rule to play basketball with my friends in the gym near my house, which makes me relaxed. 這句話用了it做形式賓語(yǔ)和非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，Sometimes my parents and I would like to visit my grandparents, who live in the suburb of the city.這句話也是用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，I also like to go shopping with my parents sometimes so that I can buy my favorite food. 這句話用了結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句。