分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息假定你叫李華,是一位兼職教師,你所任教的學(xué)校里有很多兒童嚴(yán)重超重.你就此給某報(bào)編輯寫信,給孩子的家長(zhǎng)一些忠告,寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點(diǎn)包括:應(yīng)該更加關(guān)注孩子的健康.幫助孩子養(yǎng)成良好的飲食習(xí)慣.鼓勵(lì)孩子們多運(yùn)動(dòng),并參加一些有益的課外活動(dòng)(out-of-class activities)2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫.本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):be bad for 對(duì)…有害;pay more attention to多關(guān)注;balanced diets平衡飲食;not only,but also不僅,而且;In addition另外;look forward to盼望;
All the parents are caring much about their children's life and studies,but I think they should pay more attention to their children's health.(高分句型一)
So it is very important for them to offer their children balanced diets,because healthy eating can not only provide children with enough energy for them to grow up but also keep them healthy.(高分句型二)
In addition,they ought to encourage their children to help them with some housework,take some exercise every day and take part in some out-of-class activities which can benefit the children.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Editor,
I am a part-time teacher in a primary school.Recently I've been worried to find more and more children in school are overweight.This is very bad for their health.So I'm writing to give their parents some advice as follows.
All the parents are caring much about their children's life and studies,but I think they should pay more attention to their children's health.(高分句型一)So it is very important for them to offer their children balanced diets,because healthy eating can not only provide children with enough energy for them to grow up but also keep them healthy.(高分句型二)They should help their children to stay away from junk food.In addition,they ought to encourage their children to help them with some housework,take some exercise every day and take part in some out-of-class activities which can benefit the children.(高分句型三)
I look forward to seeing all the children growing up healthily.
Yours,
Li Hua
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