6.假如你是李華,最近你從報紙上看到一家外企公司招聘秘書的廣告,請你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)提示給經(jīng)理寫一封應(yīng)聘信.
1)今年20歲,即將畢業(yè)于職業(yè)院校.主修經(jīng)濟(jì)管理.
2)學(xué)習(xí)英語超過八年了,熟悉電腦操作;在過去曾任學(xué)生報的編輯,有寫作和編輯經(jīng)驗(yàn);在校成績優(yōu)秀.
3)性格外向,交際能力強(qiáng).
要求:1)內(nèi)容要連貫、完整.
2)敘述必須用第一人稱.
3)字?jǐn)?shù):100左右.
參考詞匯:職業(yè)院校vocational school;主修 major in  經(jīng)驗(yàn)experience  操作operate
經(jīng)濟(jì)管理 business management
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to your advertisement for the position as a secretary in the newspaper.My name is Li Hua and I am twenty years old and I'm going to graduate from a vocational school.(高分句型一)I major in business management.Besides,I've learned English for more than eight years and I am familiar with computer operation.In the last three years,I've been one of the editors of our student newspaper,which makes me experienced in writing and editing.(高分句型二)I do well in my study and my scores are outstanding in my class.I am outing and good at communicating with others.I am sure that I will be qualified for secretary.
I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your company.(高分句型三)I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours
Li Hua.

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息假如你是李華,最近你從報紙上看到一家外企公司招聘秘書的廣告,請你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)提示給經(jīng)理寫一封應(yīng)聘信,寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點(diǎn)包括:假如你是李華,最近你從報紙上看到一家外企公司招聘秘書的廣告,請你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)提示給經(jīng)理寫一封應(yīng)聘信.1)今年20歲,即將畢業(yè)于職業(yè)院校.主修經(jīng)濟(jì)管理.2)學(xué)習(xí)英語超過八年了,熟悉電腦操作;在過去曾任學(xué)生報的編輯,有寫作和編輯經(jīng)驗(yàn);在校成績優(yōu)秀.3)性格外向,交際能力強(qiáng).
2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):in response to 作為…的回應(yīng);graduate from從…畢業(yè);Besides另外;be familiar with 對…熟悉;do well in 在…方面做得好;look forward to 盼望;
My name is Li Hua and I am twenty years old and I'm going to graduate from a vocational school.(高分句型一)
In the last three years,I've been one of the editors of our student newspaper,which makes me experienced in writing and editing.(高分句型二)
I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your company.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Sir or Madam,
       I am writing in response to your advertisement for the position as a secretary in the newspaper.
       My name is Li Hua and I am twenty years old and I'm going to graduate from a vocational school.(高分句型一)I major in business management.Besides,I've learned English for more than eight years and I am familiar with computer operation.In the last three years,I've been one of the editors of our student newspaper,which makes me experienced in writing and editing.(高分句型二)I do well in my study and my scores are outstanding in my class.I am outing and good at communicating with others.I am sure that I will be qualified for secretary.
        I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance to work in your company.(高分句型三)I'm looking forward to your reply.
                                                                                                      Yours,
                                                                                                     Li  Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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