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17.今天是父親節(jié).假定你是李,請給你的美國朋友John寫一封電子郵件,談談你將如何與父親一起度過這個特別的日子.要點如下:
●表述你與父親間的情感.
●為父親制作二張卡片.
●幫助父親做點事.
●陪父親散步等.
注意:1.詞數100詞左右.
2.請不要逐句翻譯,可適當發(fā)揮;
3..郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數.
Dear John,
It's Father's Day today.It's a special day,isn't it?
I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day.My father and I are good friends.Whenever I meet with difficulties,he is always there,ready to help me.(高分句型一)
Today I will make two beautiful cards for him,with my thanks and best wishes on them.Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening.(高分句型二)Besides,I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him,for he likes it very much.(高分句型三)I'm sure he'll be very happy.
What'your plan for Father's Day?I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Hua.

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文,根據提示信息今天是父親節(jié).假定你是李,請給你的美國朋友John寫一封電子郵件,談談你將如何與父親一起度過這個特別的日子,寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點包括:●表述你與父親間的情感.●為父親制作二張卡片.●幫助父親做點事.●陪父親散步等.2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象.要依據提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫.3、根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達:meet with遇到;Besides另外;play chess 下棋;look forward to盼望;hear from收到…的信息;
Whenever I meet with difficulties,he is always there,ready to help me.(高分句型一)
Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening.(高分句型二)
Besides,I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him,for he likes it very much.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear John,
       It's Father's Day today.It's a special day,isn't it?
       I think we should do something to show our love for our fathers on this special day.My father and I are good friends.Whenever I meet with difficulties,he is always there,ready to help me.(高分句型一)
       Today I will make two beautiful cards for him,with my thanks and best wishes on them.Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite food in the evening.(高分句型二)Besides,I'll take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him,for he likes it very much.(高分句型三)I'm sure he'll be very happy.
      What's your plan for Father's Day?I'm looking forward to hearing from yon.
                                                                             Yours,
                                                                             Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應,用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓練:一是語言基礎方面的訓練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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