Question

Direction: For this part, you are required to write a short essay entitled Harmfulness of Fake Products following the outline given below. You should write within 120 words.
市場(chǎng)商品豐富，但假冒商品頻現(xiàn)；
假冒商品的危害
應(yīng)對(duì)假冒商品的措施。

Answer 1

Harmfulness of Fake Products
As is known to all, China has undergone great changes in terms of products quality and variety over the last several decades. Nowadays, commodities and products of all kinds are sufficiently provided in the market. Meanwhile, a lot of fake products have appeared. Like worms that eat away the core of a good apple, fake products are threatening the well-being of individuals as well as our society.
Fake products bring serious damages on our society. Consumers are robbed of their money and have to bear the consequence caused by fake products. For example, it is reported by the media that several dozens of people were poisoned to death by fake alcohol.
Measures must be taken to ban the production of fake products. On the one hand, fake products must not be sold on the market, and strict laws should be made and enforced against fake producer, and those who sell fake products should be severely punished. On the other hand, consumers must learn how to protect themselves. Only with the joint effort of the whole society can we handle the problem properly.

試題分析：本書(shū)面表達(dá)是一篇提綱作文。提綱作文寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點(diǎn)。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；語(yǔ)言表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如As is known to all，in terms of，as well as，be robbed of, dozens of , take measures to, On the other hand；還運(yùn)用句型as引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語(yǔ)從句，only引導(dǎo)的倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)。并注意了句子的銜接如：Meanwhile，Although，and，F(xiàn)or example等等。