Question

假如你是某高中學(xué)生李光，進(jìn)入高中后，你覺得學(xué)英語的方式 和初中有很大不同，你給自己的英語老師王老師寫了一封信，講述自己的英語學(xué)習(xí)情況。要包括以下內(nèi)容：
1. 開始學(xué)習(xí)高中英語時(shí)，覺得英語比初中英語難很多，幾乎喪失信心。
2. 后來認(rèn)識(shí)到英語的重要性，每天努力學(xué)習(xí)英語，向老師和同學(xué)請(qǐng)教更好的英語學(xué)習(xí)方法。
3. 現(xiàn)在英語取得了很大進(jìn)步，對(duì)英語越來越感興趣。
要求：字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。
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Answer 1

Dear Mr. Wang,
I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high school student.
When I started senior English in the beginning, I found it much more difficult than what we learned in junior school and I almost lose heart. Later, I realized the importance of English, so I got up early every morning, recited English words, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercises. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English.
Now, I’m improving my English greatly. And I’m getting more and more interested in learning it. Thank you so much for your great help in your class.
Wish you all the best.

試題分析：題目是常見的書信作文，要求以李光的身份給英語老師寫一封信，講述自己在英語方面的學(xué)習(xí)情況。作文要包含所有要點(diǎn)，可以分三大部分來寫：第一段是寫信時(shí)的禮貌性問候；第二段寫遇到的難處以及是怎樣克服的；第三段告訴老師自己的進(jìn)步并表示感謝。使用第一人稱進(jìn)行寫作；注意寫信的格式。單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、時(shí)態(tài)、語法知識(shí)要正確，使用得當(dāng)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】首先，范文以祝愿結(jié)尾，格式很規(guī)范。范文注意使用When I started senior English, Later, so, Now, And等銜接句子和上下文，使作文顯得有條理，并且很緊湊；
范文使用了賓語從句tell you that I have made great progress in my English study和what we learned in junior school；時(shí)間狀語從句since I became a senior high school student.；現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)I’m getting more and more interested in learning it等重要語法知識(shí)和時(shí)態(tài)；語法知識(shí)掌握扎實(shí)，并能靈活運(yùn)用；
范文還使用了一些固定短語：in the beginning；lose heart；listened to；asked...for；ways of learning English等，使作文的內(nèi)容比較充實(shí)。