Question

假設(shè)今天是7月12日（星期六），天氣晴朗，你和全班同學(xué)到南郊公園（Nanjiao Park）游玩。請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，以日記的形式記敘今天你的出游情況。
1. 上午乘車1小時到達(dá)目的地，爬山、唱歌、做游戲；
2. 中午吃完午餐后組織一個小活動，向游客宣傳環(huán)保的重要性；
3. 下午4時返回。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100左右； 2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。
July 12, Saturday                                Fine
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Answer 1

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July 12, Saturday                                Fine
      Today I went on a trip to Nanjiao Park with all my classmates. After an hour’s ride, we arrived there. As soon as we got there, we began to climb the hill. All the way up, we sang happily. On top of the hill, we played some interesting games. All of us enjoyed ourselves very much.
After we had our picnic at noon, we organized an activity, talking to the visitors about the importance of protecting the environment. At about 4 in the afternoon we returned.
We not only had a good time but also did a good deed today. Though I am tired now, I feel quite happy.

解析試題分析：這是一篇以寫日記形式的作文，注意日記的格式，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法。
考點：考查綜合能力
點評：一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。