Question

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請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，按要求用英文寫作，結(jié)合親身經(jīng)歷發(fā)表你的感想，詞數(shù)不少于60.
Never be afraid of making mistakes. Actually, we’re making progress by making mistakes. Mistakes show where success lies.
注意：1. 無(wú)須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；
2. 應(yīng)緊扣材料，有明確觀點(diǎn)。
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Answer 1

Mistakes are unavoidable in life. But attitudes towards them may make a difference.
I still remember how my spoken English improved. At the beginning, I always kept silent in oral class to avoid making mistakes. When my teacher knew about my situation, he encouraged me to speak out what I wanted to regardless of mistakes. Practice makes perfect. With time going by, I build up my confidence, and now I can talk fluently in English.
Just as the saying goes, “Every bean has its black.” Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Learn from them, and success is just awaiting us.

試題分析：考查半開放性作文。本文討論的話題是“mistakes”，從所給的材料可以看出這篇文章的主題的犯錯(cuò)有時(shí)是好事，通過(guò)犯錯(cuò)我們可以得到進(jìn)步，從而取得成功。寫作的時(shí)候要圍繞這個(gè)主題展開論述，要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的英語(yǔ)提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。