Question

假定你是李華，David是美國(guó)筆友。他對(duì)中國(guó)鼓勵(lì)使用環(huán)保購(gòu)物袋很感興趣，來(lái)信向你詢問(wèn)此事。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)封回信。主要內(nèi)容如下：1,感謝他的關(guān)注。2,簡(jiǎn)要介紹相關(guān)情況。3,談?wù)勀愕母邢搿?br />注意: 1．可在所給內(nèi)容的基礎(chǔ)上做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮;
2．詞數(shù)100字左右．
3．參考詞匯: 環(huán)保袋 environment-friendly shopping bag
Dear David,
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Answer 1

Dear David:
How time flies. How are you? I’m appreciated your great interest in the use of environment-friendly shopping bags encouraged by Chinese government.
Recently, as too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our government encourages us to use environment-friendly shopping bags. Plastic bags are not free any more when we are going shopping in the supermarket, which exerts great effect on reducing the use of plastic bags.  Most of shopping centers are offering customers environmental protection shopping bags.
As far as I’m concerned, though it is just a small action, in the long term, it’s a very effective way to realize our dream of establishing a pleasant working and living environment.
Yours,
Li Hua

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