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Being a Popular Student
We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers.  ______________________________
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Being a Popular Student
We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers .To enjoy popularity , we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and try our best to take an active part in all our class activities. We should be responsible for the work and keep teamwork spirit in mind.
To be a popular student , we must show our respect , concern and sympathy for others .As a result , we never hesitate to lend a hand to those in need .
To be a popular student , we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make an effort to achieve all –round development , being good not only at our lessons but also at sports , music , painting , social services and so on .In time of success we remain modest , while in time of difficulty we keep strong –minded.
All in all, being a popular student among the classmates and teachers comes naturally to those who keep improving their personal qualities.

試題分析:本篇書面表達(dá)是要求寫一篇題目為“Being a popular student ”的討論稿。寫作內(nèi)容貼近學(xué)生生活,也反映了每個(gè)同學(xué)的內(nèi)心愿望,所以同學(xué)們寫起來(lái)應(yīng)該是得心應(yīng)手。但是寫作時(shí)要注意以下幾個(gè)方面:一 文章要點(diǎn)較多,注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。二 從段落安排上可以把要求的三個(gè)方面分三段來(lái)寫,恰當(dāng)使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞,使文章層次分明,條理清楚。三 寫作時(shí)注意恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂妹~,代詞單復(fù)數(shù)形式和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào),以免給人內(nèi)容含混不清的感覺(jué)。四 文章內(nèi)容屬于發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn),看法,所以可以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文在語(yǔ)言表達(dá)上清晰流暢,而且要點(diǎn)全面。在段落安排上用三個(gè)不定式短語(yǔ)分別引出對(duì)集體,對(duì)他人,對(duì)自己三個(gè)方面,使文章層次分明,條理清晰。此外連接詞的恰當(dāng)使用也是本文的一大亮點(diǎn),比如: not only… but also, while in time of difficulty;all in all ,as a result 等。不僅如此,文中出現(xiàn)的大量短語(yǔ)be popular with“受歡迎”, take an active part in,“積極的參加” regard .. as “認(rèn)為...是”,, make an effort to“努力做” ,In time of success “在成功的時(shí)候”,lend a hand to sb“助某人一臂之力”,不僅反映出作者詞匯的豐富,而且也使文章更加簡(jiǎn)潔明了,清晰易懂。句型上,文章使用了定語(yǔ)從句:All in all, being a popular student among the classmates and teachers comes naturally to those who keep improving their personal qualities.總之這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。
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