Question

隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的普及，越來越多的中學生上網(wǎng)交友。某英語報社就“Should students make friends online?”這個主題進行了征文大賽。請你給英語報社投一篇稿子。
內(nèi)容要點：1. 網(wǎng)上交友的優(yōu)點。（輕松交友，暢所欲言，幫助學習外語）
2. 網(wǎng)上交友的弊端。（浪費寶貴的學習時間。有時會上當受騙。）
3. 你自己的看法。
要求：1．詞數(shù)不少于100；（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。
2．內(nèi)容充實，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語言連貫；
Should Students Make Friends Online?
Whatever your age is, the Internet is a great place to hang out, where you can not only have fun but also make friends.
                                                                             
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                       

Answer 1

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Should students make friends online?
Whatever your age is, the Internet is a great place to hung out, where you can not only have fun but also make friends.                                                                      
The Internet helps students make as many friends as they want easily. Chatting online, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely. Thus they can also ease their anxiety from their studies. Some students even get help with their foreign language studies.
However, each coin has two sides. Making friends online can no doubt waste much of students’ precious time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students sometiomes get cheated online.
In my opinion, students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmate other people around us.

解析試題分析：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。
考點：提綱作文。
點評：加強積累適量的詞匯、詞組和增加各種類型句子的運用。把握好各種句型和詞匯的搭配，并從各類題材和體裁著手，思考內(nèi)容的連貫性，語言和句子的準確性。會使用連接詞或過渡句使句子的連接起來，讀起來流暢。