Question

隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的普及，越來(lái)越多的中學(xué)生上網(wǎng)交友。某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社就“Should students make friends online?”這個(gè)主題進(jìn)行了征文大賽。請(qǐng)你給英語(yǔ)報(bào)社投一篇稿子。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1. 網(wǎng)上交友的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。

2. 網(wǎng)上交友的弊端。

3. 你自己的看法。

要求：1．詞數(shù)不少于100；（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

2．內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語(yǔ)言連貫；

Should Students Make Friends Online?

Whatever your age is, the Internet is a great place to hang out, where you can not only have fun but also make friends._______________________________

                                                                                       

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Should Students Make Friends Online?

  Whatever your age is, the Internet is a great place to hang out, where you can not only have fun but also make friends.

The Internet helps students make as many friends as they want easily. Chatting online, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely. Thus they can also ease their anxiety from their studies. Some students even get help with their foreign language studies.

However, each coin has two sides. Making friends online can no doubt waste much of students’ precious time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students sometimes get cheated online.

In my opinion, students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.

【解析】

試題分析：考查半開放性作文。本文的話題是“Should students make friends online?”上網(wǎng)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。優(yōu)點(diǎn)方面可以從在網(wǎng)上可以獲取有用的信息，和世界各地的人保持聯(lián)系，可以自由發(fā)表個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)等方面展開；缺點(diǎn)可以從網(wǎng)絡(luò)安全性，以及網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲上癮等方面進(jìn)行展開。寫作時(shí)需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

考點(diǎn)：考查半開放性作文寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。