Question

你的筆友Bob將從加拿大來(lái)長(zhǎng)沙看你。你將和你的好友林濤一起陪同Bob在長(zhǎng)沙度假�，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你給Bob寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，介紹你的好友林濤。林濤的具體信息見(jiàn)下面表格,你可以選擇你認(rèn)為最重要的三至五個(gè)信息進(jìn)行介紹。 

要求：1.詞數(shù)：100-120詞；  2.請(qǐng)不要用真實(shí)姓名。

Name	Lin Tao; David (English name)
Basic Facts	boy; 16 years old; from Changsha; studies in SDFZ
Characteristics	mild, curious, and optimistic
Favorite subjects	Maths, Chemistry and English
Hobbies	football, reading and travelling
Dreams	study for a PhD and work for a research organization
Special experiences	took part in a scientific research program on virus and won the status of candidate to Peking University

 

Re: Bob (Bobhappy@163.com)

Subject: Recommend a friend

Love! Yours

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Bob，

How are you? Your email reached me with pleasure yesterday. I am excited that you are coming to Changsha to spend this winter vacation. Now, I’d like to introduce a good friend of mine, Lin Tao, who will accompany us during the holiday.

Lin Tao is a classmate of mine who is from Changsha, so he knows lots of interesting places here. Besides, he is a bright boy with rich knowledge, since he is always curious to discover the unknown, which earns him good performances in study. The most coincident thing is that he has the same dream as you do---to study for a PhD and work for a research organization. And I think you must be excited to know his experiences of winning the status of candidate to Peking University!

I’m sure we three will have a wonderful winter vacation in Changsha. Write to me when you are free.

CU soon!

【解析】

試題分析：考查表格類作文的寫(xiě)作。這是一篇書(shū)信，介紹介紹你的好友林濤。林濤的具體信息是以表格的形式給出，而且是用英語(yǔ)給出，考點(diǎn)只需要適當(dāng)串聯(lián)即可，在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候一定要使用合適的連接詞來(lái)連接全文，讓文章成為一個(gè)整體，同時(shí)要注意使用英語(yǔ)句型如I am excited that you are coming to Changsha to spend this winter vacation.等結(jié)構(gòu)，也要使用倒裝句，定語(yǔ)從句等特殊的句式來(lái)提高文章的多樣性。如he is a bright boy with rich knowledge, since he is always curious to discover the unknown, which earns him good performances in study.等

考點(diǎn)：考查表格類作文的寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于表格類作文，此類作文雖然好寫(xiě)，但是要寫(xiě)出特色是很不容易的。關(guān)鍵是要點(diǎn)要全面覆蓋，不能有遺漏和省略。寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候運(yùn)用多種表達(dá)方式，讓句子有變化。