Question

央視時空調(diào)查欄目針對目前我國現(xiàn)行的高考填報志愿的三種形式作了一個網(wǎng)上調(diào)查，調(diào)查的結果如下，你作為一名即將參加高考的考生，請簡要的描述調(diào)查的結果，并談一談你對此事的看法并說明你的理由。

注意： 1. 150詞左右，文章的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
2. 可以適當添加細節(jié)以使行文連貫。
3. 參考詞匯：填報志愿 choose one’s major or university   
According to a survey carried out by Horizon Research, _______________________________
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Answer 1

One possible version:
According to a survey carried out by Horizon research, Chinese senior high school students have different opinions on when to choose their majors or universities. Among the 1,874 students who participate in the survey, most students，about 82%，insist that the choices should be based on their scores after examinations. In their opinions, they can choose their ideal majors and universities according to their scores.12% of the students, however, believe that the choices should be made directly after the examinations. And there are still 6% of the students holding the idea that the choice should be carried out before exams.
Personally, I would rather choose my favorite major and university after knowing the exact test score. Having known the test score,we can make a proper choice. Yet the other two will add up more blindness . When we make our choices. In addition, if the choices are made before exams, it may bring anxiety during the exams, which of course will have negative effects on our performances in the exams.

試題分析：本文是篇圖表作文�？忌�在寫作之前必須認真讀圖分析含義。要求你作為即將參加高考的考生對目前我國現(xiàn)行的高考填報志愿的三種形式所作的一個網(wǎng)上調(diào)查結果進行簡要的描述 ，并談一談你對此事的看法并說明你的理由。首先確定文章的時態(tài)，要求是描述調(diào)查結果，和個人看法及理由，應該用一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱注意變化。還應該注意句子的復雜性和銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如 according to， participate in，in one’s opinion, be based on，have effects on等，還運用了 非謂語動詞做狀語; which引導的非限制性定語從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：however，In addition，等等。