Question

Growing Pains（《成長(zhǎng)的煩惱》）是大陸較早引進(jìn)的一部美國(guó)情景喜劇，講述的是西佛一家的三個(gè)孩子在成長(zhǎng)中遇到一些故事。而你們?cè)谧约旱某砷L(zhǎng)過程中也一定碰到過一些挫折，失敗，而長(zhǎng)大的標(biāo)志是你在這些經(jīng)歷中獲得了一些寶貴的財(cái)富。請(qǐng)以 Gains from Growing Pains 為題，寫一篇不少于120詞的英語短文。（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。）
要求：1. 描述成長(zhǎng)過程中的一件令你煩惱的事情。
2. 說說此事最終帶給你的啟示和收獲。
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  

Answer 1

Growing up is not always a very enjoyable time. It means we have to work hard. As for my childhood, my parents made me learn to play the violin so I had no time to play with other friends. I got very annoyed .I hated music, just because it was what they wanted me to do. Sometimes I felt puzzled and trapped. I even didn’t understand why I was a child.
Now looking back, I am so glad that my parents encouraged me to take music lessons , which can enrich my life. I come to realize why my parents are always pushing me along. Everybody is to experience growing pains ,which are just small pains in life. A little hard work and sweat never hurt us.
If we realize these pains are just small bumps on our road to success, we will realize our growing pains are actually growing gains.

試題分析：
此篇書面表達(dá)是夾敘夾議的記敘文。描述成長(zhǎng)中的煩惱以及它所帶來的收獲，內(nèi)容貼近生活，學(xué)生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作內(nèi)容�？忌�在寫作之前要認(rèn)真審題，把握兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)，即煩惱和收獲啟示；注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，要求讓“你”描述成長(zhǎng)過程中的煩惱，所以要用一般過去時(shí)，而且用第一人稱。同時(shí)要注意句子的銜接。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中定語從句和非謂語的使用不但使文章銜接緊湊，而且為文章增色不少，比如“Now looking back, I am so glad that my parents encouraged me to take music lessons , which can enrich my life” . “Everybody is to experience growing pains ,which are just small pains in life.”，此外“we will realize our growing pains are actually growing gains.”也為點(diǎn)睛之筆。文章描述精彩感人，讀后會(huì)給人帶來深刻啟示。