假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Dear Brad ,
I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school . I feel uneasily recently . At home I feel like prisoner . I am not allowed to watch TV or surf the Internet . The only thing I have to do it is studying . Every time I got a low mark , my parents will scold me sharply . There's a generation gap among my parents and me , but it's always difficult to communicate . Life are supposed to be colorful and wonderful , isn't it ? How should I devote all my time and energy to the study so as to entering a good university ? I am very unhappy and lost. I need your help .
Best wishes,
Li Ping


【小題1】grades→grade
【小題2】uneasily→uneasy
【小題3】like 后面加a
【小題4】it 去掉
【小題5】got→get
【小題6】among→between
【小題7】but→so/and
【小題8】are→is
【小題9】How→Why
【小題10】entering→enter

解析試題分析：本篇短文講述的是一個高中生的苦惱。在家里父母對他要求非常嚴格，不允許看電視或上網(wǎng)，而且只要考試成績不理想父母都會對他進行嚴厲的責罰。他不知道如何和父母進行溝通，感到有點迷茫，希望得到別人的幫助。
【小題1】考查名詞單復數(shù)。I am a boy in the first grades of a senior high school 。grades前面有序數(shù)詞first 修飾表示第一，不用復數(shù)形式，所以把grades改為grade。
【小題2】考查形容詞。I feel uneasily recently。 Feel在此為系動詞“感覺”，后面應該用形容詞做表語，故把uneasily改為uneasy。
【小題3】考查冠詞。I feel like prisoner。 Prisoner是可數(shù)名詞，在此表示單數(shù)概念，所以在like 后面加a 。
【小題4】考查定語從句。I have to do it is studying I have to do 是定語從句，省略了做賓語的關系代詞that，而it 的存在使句子成分重復，所以把it去掉。
【小題5】考查時態(tài)。Every time I got a low mark文章敘述現(xiàn)在的情況，所以應該用一般現(xiàn)在時，所以把got改為get。
【小題6】考查介詞。There's a generation gap among my parents and me此處指的是父母和“我”之間的代溝，而among常用于三者之間，所以把among改為between。
【小題7】考查連詞。but it's always difficult to communicate前后句子間沒有轉折關系，所以把but改為so或者and。
【小題8】考查主謂一致。Life are supposed to be colorful Life 是不可數(shù)名詞“生活”，所以謂語動詞應該用單數(shù)，故把are改為is。
【小題9】考查疑問詞。How should I devote all my time 。從語境可知此處作者是不想把所有的時間精力放到學習上，所以問的是原因，How改為Why。
【小題10】考查非謂語。so as to entering a good university 。So as to 后面跟動詞原形表示目的，所以把entering改為enter。
考點：考查短文改錯。

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