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5．假定你是李華．你的美國筆友Tom對中國文化有濃厚的興趣．恰好你校今年暑假將為外國學(xué)生舉辦一場漢語夏令營活動（Chinese Summer Camp），請你給他發(fā)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括
1．時間和地點；
2．內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)日常漢語、了解中國歷史和傳統(tǒng)文化、參觀博物館等；
3．報名方式和截止時間
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Tom，
Here comes a piece of good news．Chinese Summer Camp，which is intended for international students，is going to be held in our school this summer vacation．（高分句型一）Since you are obsessed with Chinese culture，I'd like to invite you to join it．
The Camp is scheduled to last 11 days，from July 18 to July 28．It covers a wide variety of cultural activities，ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture．（高分句型二）As we all know，language is closely related to culture，so I'm convinced that you can dig out Chinese cultural features from language study．In addition，the Camp provides a chance for you to visit some famous museums，which is the best way to learn about the country．（高分句型三）By admiring the historical relics，you will definitely gain a better understanding of the country．
If you want to be part of it，please sign up for it before July 2nd at our scho ol website．Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇書信類作文，美國筆友Tom對中國文化有濃厚的興趣，你接著學(xué)校暑假將為外國學(xué)生舉辦一場漢語夏令營活動向他發(fā)出邀請，幫助他了解中國文化．
同學(xué)們在寫這篇文章時，要注意以下幾點：
書信格式正確，根據(jù)題干對寫信的對象進(jìn)行調(diào)整．
開門見山介紹書信原因--夏令營，便于讀信人了解書信重點．
要點要齊全．但不要簡單羅列要點．可以適當(dāng)?shù)募右恍┳兓�，使用連接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然流程．
【范文亮點】
1．范文采取了定語從句（ Chinese Summer Camp，which is intended for international students，is going to be held in our school this summer vacation．）；條件狀語從句（If you want to be part of it，please sign up for it before July 2nd at our school website．）等句式．
2．文章采用了obsess；historical relics；a wide variety of；As we all know等高級單詞或短語．
Chinese Summer Camp，which is intended for international students，is going to be held in our school this summer vacation．（高分句型一）
It covers a wide variety of cultural activities，ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture．（高分句型二）
In addition，the Camp provides a chance for you to visit some famous museums，which is the best way to learn about the country．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       Here comes a piece of good news．Chinese Summer Camp，which is intended for international students，is going to be held in our school this summer vacation．（高分句型一）Since you are obsessed with Chinese culture，I'd like to invite you to join it．
      The Camp is scheduled to last 11 days，from July 18 to July 28．It covers a wide variety of cultural activities，ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture．（高分句型二）As we all know，language is closely related to culture，so I'm convinced that you can dig out Chinese cultural features from language study．In addition，the Camp provides a chance for you to visit some famous museums，which is the best way to learn about the country．（高分句型三）By admiring the historical relics，you will definitely gain a better understanding of the country．
       If you want to be part of it，please sign up for it before July 2nd at our scho ol website．Looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．