Question

20．Directions：Writing an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
請根據(jù)下面的圖片，結(jié)合你個人的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀愕南敕ǎ?br />

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖畫類作文，根據(jù)提示信息請根據(jù)下面的圖片，結(jié)合你個人的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀愕南敕�，寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，2、圖畫是文章的總體框架，要在圖畫的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：stick out 突出；cut off切斷；Indeed確實(shí)；based on 以…為根據(jù)；More importantly更重要的是；strive for為…而奮斗；
The image above embodies what is referred to as cooperation and win-win situation，the significance of which，from where I stand，cannot be overrated．（高分句型一）
Only then were we aware that the duties could have been allocated based on what each member exceled at．（高分句型二）
True，it is that competing interests and conflicting desires prevail universally，but history has witnessed the long term joint effort between opposing sides，particularly political parties．（高分句型三）

解答 Held in four hands are four irregular shaped jigsaws，with some parts sticking out and some cut off．But when pieced together，they constitute a flawless and crackless square．The image above embodies what is referred to as cooperation and win-win situation，the significance of which，from where I stand，cannot be overrated．（高分句型一）
　　Indeed，it is through working collaboratively that we can get a clear picture of our virtues and drawbacks．Once my learning group was assigned a presentation task covering three sections．We had planned to work on each section separately，but during the rehearsal phase problems like computer illiteracy，lack of fluency popped out．Only then were we aware that the duties could have been allocated based on what each member exceled at．（高分句型二）
　　More importantly，it pays to put aside disputes and seek common development instead．True，it is that competing interests and conflicting desires prevail universally，but history has witnessed the long term joint effort between opposing sides，particularly political parties．（高分句型三）For instance，the Democrats have long been working in partnership with the Republicans，both committed to reviving US economy and striving for citizens'welfare．
　　As social beings，we can hardly exist alone in society．United we stand，divided we fail．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．