下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(Λ),并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
修改:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意:1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2. 只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred Yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine what happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.


【小題1】friend → friends
【小題2】it → one
【小題3】that →which
【小題4】加上for
【小題5】he → I
【小題6】去掉the
【小題7】pleasing → pleased
【小題8】after → later
【小題9】gives → gave
【小題10】what →how

解析試題分析:
【小題1】… most of my friend had bicycles. 改為friends. (most of + 可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù) / 不可數(shù)名詞)
【小題2】I hoped I could also have it. 改為one (it指代同一件東西;one指代同一類事物)
【小題3】…, that was only one hundred Yuan. 改為which (that不引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)
【小題4】I asked my father ∧ the money. 加上for (向某人索要某物:ask sb. for .sth.)
【小題5】He should find the other half myself. 改為I (父親說給我一半買車的錢,另一半必須“我”自己想辦法)
【小題6】So I went to sell newspapers after the school. 去掉the (after school, 固定用法,意為“放學(xué)后”)
【小題7】My father was pleasing when… 改為pleased (pleased, 感到高興;pleasing, 令人高興)
【小題8】…when I showed him the money a month after. 改為later (later, 副詞,意為“后來”; after, 介詞或連詞,后接名詞或句子)
【小題9】He gives me the other fifty. 改為gave (時態(tài)錯誤。父親“給”錢發(fā)生于過去)
【小題10】You can imagine what happy I was… 改為how (what是代詞,后接名詞;how是副詞,后接形容詞或副詞。happy是形容詞,前面應(yīng)用how)
考點:短文改錯

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