書面表達(dá)(15分)

目前,不少人在寫作文或交流時(shí)喜歡使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言。就此現(xiàn)象,你班最近舉行了一場討論。請根據(jù)下表的提示,客觀地介紹討論的情況及你的觀點(diǎn)。

40%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為

60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為

你的觀點(diǎn)

1.有點(diǎn)荒誕,有時(shí)讓人無法理解

2.違背了漢語的語法規(guī)則,對學(xué)習(xí)毫無幫助

1.幽默,使語言更生動(dòng)

2.有助于表達(dá)思想

1…

2. …

荒誕ridiculous

注意:

1. 對所給提示,不要簡單翻譯,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連貫。

2. 詞數(shù)120-150左右。開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there came a kind of language called Web Language.___________________________________________________________

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Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there has come a kind of language called Web Language. Recently, our class has held a discussion on whether it’s good for students to use Web Language in writing compositions or communication.

40% of the students are not in favor of the idea of using Web Language, thinking it ridiculous to see or hear words which are not commonly used in our daily life. Worse still, it’s hard for them to make themselves understood. In their opinion, it is against Chinese grammar, and it’s not beneficial to students’ studies.

However, the rest of the students are fond of it. They think what they say will sound humorous, which makes the language more lively. Moreover, it is of special help for them to express themselves freely.

In my opinion, it is a phenomenon worth thinking about. I don’t think it good to use Web Language. It may be fashionable as some think, but you may also make your idea confusing, leaving other people at a loss.

【解析】

試題分析:本題要求考生綜述討論情況、雙方觀點(diǎn)并闡明自己的觀點(diǎn)。全文應(yīng)使用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。注意闡明自己觀點(diǎn)的部分不要與前文雙方觀點(diǎn)重復(fù)。雖然不可逐條翻譯,但是不要遺漏要點(diǎn),否則影響得分。注意詞匯等表達(dá)手段的多樣化、避免句式單一。行文要連貫。用自己熟悉的語言,不要生編硬造,避免中式英語。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文屬于議論文的題材,采用“三段式”文體。首先對本班就有關(guān)是否使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語言進(jìn)行討論的情況進(jìn)行總體說明。然后對40%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為是不好的,有點(diǎn)荒誕,有時(shí)讓人無法理解it ridiculous to see or hear words,it’s hard for them to make themselves understood.同時(shí)違背了漢語的語法規(guī)則,對學(xué)習(xí)毫無幫助it is against Chinese grammar, and it’s not beneficial to students’ studies.然后對其余的學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡述,幽默,使語言更生動(dòng)They think what they say will sound humorous,有助于表達(dá)思想it is of special help for them to express themselves freely.最后提出自己的觀點(diǎn),可以就自己反對或是支持的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡述。

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