Question

前不久，學生會向高三學生發(fā)出倡議：十八歲生日時，請你為父母做一件事。同學們積極響應，紛紛表達自己的想法。請根據(jù)以上信息，以“Something Special for Parents”為題用英語寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：
1. 描述以上有關(guān)學生會倡議的信息和同學們的反應；
2. 作為一名高三的學生，你的做法及理由是什么。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120左右；
2. 可適當增加細節(jié)， 以使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；
3. 短文的標題及開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Something Special for Parents
Not long ago,Student Union in our school advocated that_______________

Answer 1

不唯一
Something Special for Parents
Not long ago,Student Union in our school advocated that Senior Three students should do something special for their parents on their 18^th birthday. All the students were actively in response to it and most of them have come up with their ideas. Some choose to write a letter,saying it’s the best way to express their appreciation as well as love for their dearest parants. Others prefer to cook a big meal to show that they’ve already grown up.
As for me, I tend to do up hair,wash feet and cut fingernails for my parents. By doing what my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they devote to bringing me up. Also, being eighteen years old means it’s time that I should take responsibility to take care of them.

試題分析：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。注意文章文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
點評：好作文應該是緊扣文章主題，遵循特定的文體格式，選用恰當?shù)恼Z言合理組織文章結(jié)構(gòu)，內(nèi)容統(tǒng)一、連貫，語法、拼寫、標點正確，用詞恰當。為了避免太多單詞拼寫錯誤，語法錯誤，不要為了追求詞語的華麗而堆積一些自己也沒把握的單詞，不要刻意追求長句而寫一些自己不知對錯的有多個從句組成的長句。考試時最好選擇自己最有把握的詞匯，短語，句式。