Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Mr. Green,

I’m very exciting to learn that you will start a magazine together. That sounds great and I definitely agree you on that.

Some of the columns that you mention in the letter are really my cup of tea. ＂Cultural Express＂ give us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different part of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each another. Apart from that, ＂ Blurt Out＂ is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improving oral English. ＂ Entertainment＂ is also cool! The popular singers, actors or celebrities are so attractively that you absolutely can’t miss this part. Teenagers are to fond of popular things, too.

Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read this magazine.

Yours,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Green,

I’m very to learn that you will start a magazine together. That sounds great and I definitely agree you on that.

Some of the columns that you in the letter are really my cup of tea. ＂Cultural Express＂ us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each . Apart from that, ＂Blurt Out＂ is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and oral English. ＂Entertainment＂ is also cool! The popular singers, actors celebrities are so that you absolutely can’t miss this part. Teenagers are fond of popular things, too.

Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read this magazine.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

第一處：exciting→ excited excited（人）興奮的；exciting令人興奮的（事情）。此處修飾人，故用excited。

第二處：agree后加with agree是不及物動(dòng)詞，不能直接加賓語(yǔ)。agree with sb.表示＂同意某人的觀點(diǎn)、看法＂，故在agree后加with。

第三處：mention→ mentioned that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句中的動(dòng)作發(fā)生在過(guò)去，故應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

第四處：give→ gives ＂Cultural Express＂ 是專(zhuān)欄標(biāo)題，作主語(yǔ)時(shí)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)使用第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)。

第五處：part→ parts 這里表示＂不同的地域＂，diferent后接復(fù)數(shù)名詞。

第六處：another→ other ＂向彼此學(xué)習(xí)＂ 應(yīng)用learn from each other。

第七處：improving→ improve and連接了兩個(gè)不定式to do作狀語(yǔ)，第二個(gè)不定式符號(hào)to可省略，故此處用動(dòng)詞原形。

第八處：or→ and 這里表示并列，而不表示選擇，故這里應(yīng)改為and。

第九處：attractively→ attractive 這里是so…that…結(jié)構(gòu)，so前面是be動(dòng)詞，此處應(yīng)用形容詞，故將attractively改為attractive。

第十處：去掉to be fond of是固定短語(yǔ)，意思是＂喜歡＂。