Question

【題目】（十二）

孩子的成長和教育是社會熱議的話題。家長撫育孩子的不同態(tài)度對他們今后的成長起著至關(guān)重要的作用。請觀察下面的漫畫，根據(jù)要求用英文寫一篇短文。

要求：（1）描述漫畫內(nèi)容；（2）分析漫畫所揭示的問題；（3）提出你的看法。

注意：（1）短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（2）考生可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、連貫；（3）詞數(shù)120左右；（4）文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。

參考詞匯：dote on sb 溺愛某人

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Answer 1

【答案】

From the picture, we can see the ways three mothers treat their children separately. One of them becomes very rude to her little son once he behaves badly. The second one, obviously, is a doting mother. She does what she can to satisfy her child. Another mother is keeping her son company, reading a book together. They both look very peaceful and happy.

It is understandable that every parent hopes their children become good. But the proper attitude of parents plays an important part when their children are brought up. We can tell that the first two mothers’ children will probably lack some important qualities when they grow up, and that the third mother’s child is sure to be healthy in mind.

As far as I’m concerned, not only is education of children teachers’ task, but parents should also attach greater importance to it. If children are properly treated when brought up, they will become healthy both physically and psychologically.

【解析】這是一篇看圖寫作，一般寫成三段式，即先寫圖畫內(nèi)容，然后給出解釋，最后給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。漫畫描寫的是三位家長教育孩子的不同方式，描述時(shí)注意描寫全面，使用正確的英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣，在保證正確的前提下，多使用復(fù)合句。本文開篇就使用了一個(gè)狀語從句we can see the ways three mothers treat their children separately. The ways 后面接句子，實(shí)質(zhì)上是省略了in which。 第二句One of them becomes very rude to her little son once he behaves badly.使用了條件從句… once …。句式十分靈活多變。第三句使用了副詞obviously做插入語。 第四句為一賓語從句She does what she can to satisfy her child. what=something that。第五句Another mother is keeping her son company, reading a book together. 使用正在進(jìn)行時(shí)，并用分詞reading 做狀語。第二段用一經(jīng)典句式開頭，It is +adj that+句子，不失為一亮點(diǎn)。是七句使用But做為銜接，使文章緊湊。第八句看起來復(fù)雜，其實(shí)是一賓語從句，使用了and將兩個(gè)從句連接起來。第八句As far as I’m concerned開頭，為必須熟悉的短語。使用了not only…but also,注意否定詞在句首時(shí)必須使用部分倒裝。第八句為條件狀語從句，when brought up為一時(shí)間狀語，完整句型為when they are brought up.本文最大的亮點(diǎn)是句式多變，大量使用從句，并恰當(dāng)使用了The second，Another和連詞but等,使文章條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。