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【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

Tourism is always close related to culture. Cultural tourism becomes new landmark in the tourist enterprise. For a tourist guide, it is quite an easy job to introduce or described the natural scenery to the visitors, and it is not that easy for them to explain the culture. China is a large country for time-honored history. From the ancient time, the Chinese ancestors laboured, live, and multiplied on this vast land and have created splendid culture. As one of the four centers of the world’s earliest civilizations it has a recording history of nearly 4,000 years, Throughout the history of Chinese Civilization, its agriculture has been known for their high level. During these 4,000 years, China has raised many of great thinkers, inventors, statesmen, writers and artists.

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【答案】

Tourism is always related to culture. Cultural tourism becomes new landmark in the tourist enterprise. For a tourist guide, it is quite an easy job to introduce or the natural scenery to the visitors, it is not that easy for them to explain the culture. China is a large country time-honored history. From the ancient , the Chinese ancestors laboured, , and multiplied on this vast land and have created splendid culture. As one of the four centers of the world’s earliest civilizations it has a history of nearly 4,000 years, Throughout the history of Chinese Civilization, its agriculture has been known for high level. During these 4,000 years, China has raised many of great thinkers, inventors, statesmen, writers and artists.

【解析】

【語篇解讀】本文為說明文。講述的是文化旅游成了旅游業(yè)中的一個(gè)新的地標(biāo)和中國(guó)文化的悠久歷史。

第一處：第一句話中的close改為closely�？疾楦痹~。句意：旅游總是與文化密切聯(lián)系。根據(jù)句意可知此處應(yīng)該用副詞closely修飾related。

第二處：第二句話中的new前加a�？疾楣谠~。句意：文化旅游成了旅游業(yè)中的一個(gè)新的地標(biāo)。landmark為可數(shù)名詞，結(jié)合句意可知應(yīng)該用不定冠詞a修飾new landmark。

第三處：第三句話中的described改為describe�？疾榉侵^語動(dòng)詞。句意：對(duì)于一位導(dǎo)游來說，向游客介紹或描述自然風(fēng)光是件很容易的事，但是解釋文化對(duì)于他們來說就不那么容易了。根據(jù)句意可知it為形式主語，此處應(yīng)用describe與前面的 introduce構(gòu)成不定式結(jié)構(gòu)to do作真正主語。

第四處：第三句話中的and改為but�？疾檫B詞。根據(jù)句意可知此處應(yīng)用but表示轉(zhuǎn)折。

第五處：第四句話中的for改為with�？疾榻樵~。句意：中國(guó)是一個(gè)有著悠久歷史的大國(guó)。根據(jù)句意可知應(yīng)用介詞with表示“帶有，有”。

第六處：第五句話中的time改為times�？疾槊�詞。ancient times古代。

第七處：第五句話中的live改為lived�？疾闀r(shí)態(tài)。句意：從古代，中國(guó)的祖先在這片廣闊的土地上勞動(dòng)、生活和繁衍，創(chuàng)造了輝煌的文化。根據(jù)句意，結(jié)合laboured和multiplied可知此處應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí)lived。

第八處：第六句話中的recording改為recorded�？疾榉侵^語動(dòng)詞。history與record之間為被動(dòng)關(guān)系，應(yīng)用過去分詞作定語。

第九處：第七句話中的their改為its�？疾榇�詞。在中國(guó)的文明歷史中，它的農(nóng)業(yè)以它的高水平而出名。根據(jù)句意可知此處應(yīng)用its代指“中國(guó)農(nóng)業(yè)的”。

第十處：最后一句話中的of去掉�？疾閿�(shù)量形容詞。數(shù)量形容詞many可直接修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，of多余，故去掉of。