Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Nowadays more and more Chinese go to work with bicycle, leaving their cars at home. Why are so many people riding bicycles to work? They have different reason for it.

First, bicycles do not use up any fuel. Therefore, they cost less than other means of transport. Besides, bicycles do not need many space on the road, and it is easily to find a place for them. And everybody knows that riding a bicycle is healthy sport.

When people drive their cars to work or shop, they lost the chance to exercise, but the waste gas from the cars will pollute the air. And moreover, people feel annoying when looking for a parking lot in te busy city center. So I prefer riding a bicycle to drive a car.

We are looking forward to a cleaner and better environment by changing our life style.

Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays more and more Chinese go to work bicycle, leaving their cars at home. Why are so many people riding bicycles to work? They have different for it.

First, bicycles do not use up any fuel. Therefore, they cost less than other means of transport. Besides, bicycles do not need space on the road, and it is to find a place for them. And everybody knows that riding a bicycle is healthy sport.

When people drive their cars to work or shop, they the chance to exercise, the waste gas from the cars will pollute the air. And moreover, people feel when looking for a parking lot in the busy city center. So I prefer riding a bicycle to a car.

We are looking forward to a cleaner and better environment by changing our life style.

【解析】

【語(yǔ)篇解讀】本文為議論文。講述的是現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越多的人騎自行車(chē)去上班或購(gòu)物的原因。

第一處：第一句話中的with 改為by。 考查介詞。句意：現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越多的中國(guó)人騎自行車(chē)去上班，把轎車(chē) 留在家里。根據(jù)句意和后面的bicycle前無(wú)冠詞可知此處應(yīng)用介詞by，構(gòu)成“by+交通工具”結(jié)構(gòu)，表示“乘 坐某種交通工具”。

第二處：第三句話中的reason 改為reasons�？疾槊�詞。根據(jù)different可知reason應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

第三處：第二段第一句話中的up去掉�？疾閯�(dòng)詞和動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)。句意：首先，自行車(chē)不使用任何燃料。根據(jù) 句意可知此處表示“使用”而不是“用光”，故去掉up。

第四處：第二段第三句話中的many改為much�？疾樾稳菰~。space為不可數(shù)名詞，應(yīng)用much修飾表示“許多”。

第五處：第二段第三句話中的easily 改為easy�？疾楦痹~。此處it為形式主語(yǔ)，真正主語(yǔ)為后面的不定式 短語(yǔ)to find a place for them，故應(yīng)用形容詞easy作表語(yǔ)。

第六處：第二段最后一句話中的healthy前加a�？疾楣谠~。句意：每個(gè)人都知道騎自行車(chē)是一項(xiàng)健康的運(yùn) 動(dòng)。根據(jù)句意可知此處應(yīng)用不定冠詞a。

第七處：第三段第一句話中的lost改為lose�？疾闀r(shí)態(tài)。句意：當(dāng)人們開(kāi)車(chē)去上班或購(gòu)物時(shí)，他們失去了鍛 的機(jī)會(huì)，而且汽車(chē)排出的廢氣會(huì)污染空氣。根據(jù)句意可知此處應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表示現(xiàn)在的客觀事實(shí)， 故改為lose。

第八處：第三段第一句話中的but 改為and�？疾檫B詞。根據(jù)句意可知此處應(yīng)用and表示并列。

第九處：第三段第二句話中的annoying改為annoyed�？疾樾稳菰~。句意：另外，當(dāng)人們?cè)诜泵Φ氖兄行膶?/span> 找停車(chē)場(chǎng)時(shí)會(huì)感到很惱火。annoying令人惱怒的，令人惱火的；annoyed感到惱怒的，感到惱火的。根 據(jù)句意可知此處應(yīng)用annoyed。

第十處：第三段最后一句話中的drive 改為driving�？疾榉侵^語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。句意：因此，與開(kāi)車(chē)比起來(lái)，我更 喜歡騎自行車(chē)。根據(jù)句意結(jié)合prefer的用法可知此處應(yīng)用driving構(gòu)成prefer doing to doing（與……比 起來(lái)更喜歡……）結(jié)構(gòu)。