Question

1 Nacy 是一個(gè)有著長(zhǎng)發(fā)的女孩.    2. 她又高又瘦,臉上總是帶著笑容.
3 她會(huì)講英語(yǔ)和法語(yǔ).              4 她喜歡給朋友講笑話(huà),但不會(huì)嘲笑別人.
5 她經(jīng)常在學(xué)習(xí)上幫助我,并鼓勵(lì)我努力學(xué)習(xí).

Answer 1

Nancy is a girl with long hair . She is thin and tall. She is very outgoing and there are always some smiles on her face.Because she can speak English and French. She sometimes talks with her classmates in English and French. She enjoys telling jokes with her friends,but she never laughs at others in trouble. she is also friendly to others.And she often helps me with my study.And she encourages me to work hard. We get on well with each other.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文，所給材料十分詳實(shí)，在寫(xiě)作中注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)形式。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文內(nèi)容豐富，還應(yīng)用了不少的短語(yǔ)，laughs at others in trouble，嘲笑困境之中的人，enjoys doing 喜歡做……，encourage sb to do 鼓勵(lì)某人做描述 get on well with sb,和某人相處融洽等，使文章更生動(dòng)。