Question

(本大題10分,開(kāi)頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名)

Animal	the panda
Look	Color	黑白色
	Eyes	圓圓的黑眼睛
Favorite food	bamboo
Reason	非�？蓯�(ài)

My favorite animal in the zoo
My name is Li Ming . Today_______________________________________________
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Answer 1

My favorite animal in the zoo
My name is Li Ming . Today is Sunday. I go to visit the zoo with my friends. In the zoo, we see the pandas from Ya’an. They are my favorite animals. They are black and white. They have round and black eyes. Their favorite food is bamboo. They are very cute, so I love them very much. I am happy today.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹今天去動(dòng)物園的活動(dòng)和自己最喜歡的動(dòng)物。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如： I go to......； They are......；They have.....及I love......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。開(kāi)頭介紹了去動(dòng)物園餐館，接下來(lái)介紹自己最喜歡的動(dòng)物熊貓，最后說(shuō)出自己很高興。此處用了go to visit the zoo，with my friends，very much等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。