Question

學(xué)校的English Center是同學(xué)們練習(xí)英語的場(chǎng)所。這里的 Teenager Hotline每天都能收到不少同學(xué)的咨詢電話。作為熱線的一名志愿者，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)當(dāng)時(shí)的記錄給遇到問題的這位同學(xué)提供具體建議并說明原因。字?jǐn)?shù)：70詞左右。
Student: Mary  
Problem: I’m going to be in Grade 9 next term; I’m under too much pressure. I don’t know what I should do.
1、學(xué)習(xí)努力。2、鍛煉身體，使自己更健康。3、保持飲食平衡，保證足夠的睡眠。4、與父母或老師交談，他們也許會(huì)給你好的建議。
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Answer 1

 
I have knew about your problem. I have some advic to help you. First, I think you should study hard. If you pay attention to your study , you’ll have less time to worry about other things. Secondil, to keep in good health, you have to do more ssports. Also, it is important to have a balanced diet. Besides those, you must have at least eight hours’ sleep every night. Enough sleep can lead to good grades. At last ,you can talk with your parents about your problem. Maybe they have good advice for you, After all, they have been young and experinced the same thing.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱式的給材料作文。要求給瑪麗的問題提建議。主要用到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第二人稱。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文能將要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚。短文有層次，條理清楚。能適當(dāng)?shù)挠蒙线B詞，使文章更有邏輯性。