Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，以“My best friend”為題寫一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文.(表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。)
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1.最好的朋友是湯姆；
2.長(zhǎng)得又高又瘦，戴著小而圓的眼鏡；看起來(lái)很聰明；
3.慷慨大方且樂(lè)于助人，經(jīng)常在公交車上給別人讓座。
4.酷愛體育，擅長(zhǎng)打籃球；每周二下午練習(xí)打籃球；姚明是他的偶像(hero)；
5. 長(zhǎng)大后……(2-3句)
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Answer 1

I have a friend. His name is Tom. He is my best friend. He is both tall and thin. He uaually wears small and round glasses. He looks quite clever. Tom is generous .He is willing to share things with his friends .He is always ready to help people. For example, he often gives his seat to others on the bus. He loves sports very much and good at basketball. He practices playing basketball every Tuesday afternoon. His hero is Yao Ming. He says he is going to be a professional basketball player like Yao Ming when he grows up . He wants to play basketball for national team. He believes his dream will come true one day.

試題分析：本題要求以My best friend為題，根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)寫一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，而且要做到表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)可知，本文主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)書寫，可以用第三人稱。一點(diǎn)要注意把每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)都表達(dá)出來(lái)，不要遺漏任何一個(gè)，并且要圍繞主題適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫兩三個(gè)有關(guān)長(zhǎng)大以后的句子。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】該文中以下幾個(gè)句子用得很好。①He is both tall and thin.② He is willing to share things with his friends .③ He is always ready to help people.