Question

Ms James是你校的一位外籍教師，五年前從美國(guó)來(lái)到你校教英語(yǔ)，她下周三將要回國(guó)。回國(guó)前夕，學(xué)校將為她舉行歡送晚會(huì)。請(qǐng)你用下面所給的提示詞，以及要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)一篇英文歡送辭。詞數(shù)90左右，歡送辭的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出。
提示詞：friendly, strict, help, thankful, journey
要點(diǎn)：1.她友好、又易相處，但對(duì)我們要求嚴(yán)格。
2.幾年來(lái)一直工作努力，盡最大努力使課生動(dòng)有趣，學(xué)生們對(duì)她的課感興趣
3. Ms James精力充沛，幽默又樂(lè)于助人，她在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)上幫我們很多，我們已取得巨大進(jìn)步，我們都很感謝她。
4.她下周三將要離開(kāi)回美國(guó)，我們祝她路途愉快。

Answer 1

Good evening, everyone!
I’m very glad to show our thanks to Ms James. Good evening, everyone! I’m very glad to show our thanks to Ms James. Ms James came to teach us from the US five years ago. She is friendly and easy to get along with, but she’s strict with us. All these years she has worked hard. She has tried her best to make her class lively and interesting. We’re very interested in her English class. Ms James is energetic, humorous and helpful. She’s helped us a lot in our English study. With her help, we have made great progress. We all feel thankful to her.
Next Wednesday Ms James will leave for America. Let’s wish her a nice journey. That’s all!
That’s all! Thank you.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少.如: show our thanks to表達(dá)對(duì)（某人）的感謝, easy to get along with易于相處，be strict with 對(duì)（某人）要求嚴(yán)格，try one’s best to do sth盡力做某事，be interested in對(duì)某事感興趣，wish her a nice journey祝她旅途愉快等,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。