Question

12．用微笑播撒陽光，用行動踐行夢想，用一種無形的精神力量感染著身邊的每一個人，為同學(xué)們樹立了一個個積極向上的榜樣--這就是"陽光少年"．請你以"A Sunshine Teenager"為題寫一篇英語短文，介紹一位你身邊的"陽光少年"（假如這位"陽光少年"名叫 Li Hua）．
寫作要求：
1．參考詞匯：friendly，be ready，warm-hearted；outgoing，active，housework，be afraid，share，take an active part in等；
2．詞數(shù)為80左右（開頭已給出，不計入總數(shù)）；
3．短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名及校名．
Hello!My name is Xiao Ming．I'm studying in No.1Middle School．There are many sunshine teenagers around us． 
                                                                                      
Yours，
Zhang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：He gets on well with others他和別人相處得很好．get on/along well with sb．與某人相處融洽，和諧．
高分句型二：He is never afraid of difficulties他從不害怕困難．be afraid of （doing） sth．害怕（做）某事．

解答 A Sunshine Teenager
      Hello!My name is Xiao Ming．I'm studying in No.1Middle School．There are many sunshine teenagers around us．
       Li Hua is one of them．（點(diǎn)明主題）He is honest and kind．He gets on well with others（高分句型一）．He is always ready to help others．He goes to the old people's home to do something for the old．He reads newspapers for them，cleans their rooms and washes their clothes．He is also warmhearted，active and outgoing．He always helps his parents do housework，such as doing the dishes，sweeping the floor and making dinner．He is never afraid of difficulties（高分句型二）．He works very hard and he likes reading．And he takes an active part in all kinds of sports．After school，he plays football with his teammates．And he joins the school clubs，such as the music club，the art club and the chess club．He learns a lot from all his activities．（介紹他的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)）
      Li Hua is the best sunshine teenager in my heart．I should learn from him．（得出結(jié)論）

點(diǎn)評 （1）句型多樣化，不要I（We）…到底，使人覺得乏味．（2）適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句．（3）進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時，適當(dāng)使用定語從句．（4）適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動詞．（5）偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感．