Question

研究表明音樂(lè)對(duì)人們的情緒有著重要的影響，因此人們用不同的音樂(lè)來(lái)調(diào)節(jié)心情。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。

聽(tīng)音樂(lè)前的情緒狀態(tài)	適用音樂(lè)	聽(tīng)音樂(lè)后的心境
壓力大，過(guò)分焦慮	流行音樂(lè)	放松
沉迷電腦游戲，興奮過(guò)度	鄉(xiāng)村音樂(lè)	平靜(calm)
困倦、疲勞	搖滾音樂(lè)	振奮
孤獨(dú)、悲傷	（考生自擬）	（考生自擬）

注意：1. 要求80-100詞。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 內(nèi)容必須包括上表中的要點(diǎn)；
3. 條理清楚，語(yǔ)句連貫；
4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名等信息。
Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods(情緒). ________
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Answer 1

Research has shown that music has an important effect on one’s moods. So we can change our moods by listening to different kinds of music. If you have too much pressure, you can listen to pop music to make you relaxed. People who enjoy playing computer games are too excited so they can make themselves calm by listening to the country music. And if you feel tired and sleepy, you can listen to the rock music so that you will feel excited again. When I feel lonely and sad, I often listen to soft music which always cheers me up. It makes me happy again.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。主要寫(xiě)音樂(lè)對(duì)人們的情緒有著重要的影響，因此人們用不同的音樂(lè)來(lái)調(diào)節(jié)心情，全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如 has an important effect on，listening to ，different kinds of，cheer me up，so that；賓語(yǔ)從句如 that music has an important effect on one’s moods；定語(yǔ)從句如who enjoy playing computer games，which always cheers me up；條件狀語(yǔ)從句如If you have too much pressure, if you feel tired and sleepy；時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句如When I feel lonely and sad；目的狀語(yǔ)從句如 so that you will feel excited again；結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句如so they can make themselves calm by listening to the country music. 文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿(mǎn)，表達(dá)流暢。