Question

隨著甲型流感（H1N1 Flu）在全球的不斷蔓延, 越來(lái)越多的人意識(shí)到了預(yù)防流感的重要性，為了進(jìn)一步號(hào)召人們行動(dòng)起來(lái)，共同防控流感，請(qǐng)你寫一封倡議書，內(nèi)容如下：
1，均衡飲食……
2，養(yǎng)成良好生活習(xí)慣，勤洗手，充足睡眠，加強(qiáng)鍛煉.保持心情舒暢……
3，不去人多地方，減少外出。
4，如有發(fā)燒，咳嗽(cough)，立即去醫(yī)院。
要求：1. 書寫規(guī)范，語(yǔ)言流暢，不能逐字翻譯。
2. 80字左右。
As we all know H1N1 flu is really serious now, we should do something to stop it from spreading.
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Answer 1

Dear classmates,
Now more and more people get the bad illness called Swine H1N1 all over the world.Swine H1N1 has become the center of attention.Speak of it,many people are terrified.In fact,if we face the illness in a right way ,it won't terrify us.And we can do some things to keep healthy.we should eat blanced diet ,We should wash hands more and we should open the window to enjoy the fresh air.We should also do more exercise and get more sleep.We can also eat more vegetables and fruits. We can’t go to the place where there are many people, If you have a fever or cough ,you should go to hostipal at once.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹如何預(yù)防甲型流感（H1N1 Flu，根據(jù)內(nèi)容可能會(huì)用到征求建議的句子如we should +動(dòng)詞的原形。提示中從飲食到活動(dòng)，從養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣到不要到人多的地方去，如發(fā)現(xiàn)有問(wèn)題及時(shí)就醫(yī)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文不僅使用了征求建議的語(yǔ)句而且文章連貫有理有據(jù)，可見該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。使用了大量的短語(yǔ).如do some things to keep healthy.we should eat blanced diet。句式We can’t go to the place where there are many people, where 引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句， 使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。