Question

14．假設(shè)你班為促進學生素質(zhì)的全面發(fā)展，最近以"當班干是否會影響自己的學習？"為題進行了一次討論．許多同學認為當班干不會影響自己的學習，但也有一些同學認為當班干會影響自己的學習．請你根據(jù)以下表格中的內(nèi)容要點提示，用英語寫一篇短文．

樂觀者的觀點	1．當班干不會影響學習； 2．學習好的關(guān)鍵因素：…（自擬理由） 3．當班干還會有利于你的學習提高：…（自擬理由）
擔心者的觀點	1．當班干會影響學習； 2．當班干就不會有足夠時間學習：…（自擬理由） 3．學習會掉隊．
你自己的觀點	…（自擬觀點和理由）

要求：1．詞數(shù)100個左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．所寫內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的所有的信息，并作適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮；
3．不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息．
（參考詞匯：掉隊 fall behind，自信心 conference，關(guān)系 relationship）
Is it good to be the class leader？
Does being a class leader affect（影響） our studies？Different students have different opinions（觀點）．
Some students think being a class leader doesn't influence our studies．If we want to do well in our studies，we must listen to the teacher carefully and do some exercises to practise．And being a class leader doesn't harm either of these．Class leaders are always better at studying than other students．They need to set a good example to others，so they always try their best to make progress in their studies．
However，some others think being a class leader affects our studies．As a class leader，we don't have much time to study．We need to help others to study．And we need to spend a lot of time keeping order．Then there is not much time for ourselves．We will fall behind．
In my opinion，being a class leader at school doesn't influence our studies．It's a good chance to improve ourselves．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是說說同學們針對"當班干是否會影響自己的學習？"發(fā)表的不同觀點，并談?wù)勛约旱挠^點．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
一、樂觀者的觀點 
1．當班干不會影響學習；
2．學習好的關(guān)鍵因素：…（自擬理由）
3．當班干還會有利于你的學習提高：…（自擬理由）
二、擔心者的觀點 
1．當班干會影響學習；
2．當班干就不會有足夠時間學習：…（自擬理由）
3．學習會掉隊．
三、你自己的觀點 …
常用到的重點短語：
do well in 擅長
set an example  樹榜樣
try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
spend+時間+doing sth 花時間做某事
fall behind 落后
【高分句型】
1①．If we②want to do well in our studies，we must listen to the teacher carefully and do some exercises to practise．
①if引導的條件狀語從句，主句含有情態(tài)動詞must，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時．
②want to do sth想要做某事；do well in 擅長．

2．They need to①set a good example to others，②so they always③try their best to make progress in their studies．
①set a good example  樹立一個好榜樣
②so表示所以．
③try one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事；make progress 取得進步

3．①However，some others think②③being a class leader affects our studies．
 ①however 然而，表轉(zhuǎn)折．
②think后是省略了引導詞that的賓語從句．
③動名詞做主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)．

解答 Is it good to be the class leader？
Does being a class leader affect（影響） our studies？Different students have different opinions（觀點）．
Some students think being a class leader doesn't influence our studies．（當班干不會影響學習）If we want to do well in our studies，we must listen to the teacher carefully and do some exercises to practise．【高分句型】（學習好的關(guān)鍵因素）And being a class leader doesn't harm either of these．Class leaders are always better at studying than other students．They need to set a good example to others，so they always try their best to make progress in their studies．【高分句型】（當班干還會有利于你的學習提高及理由）
However，some others think being a class leader affects our studies．【高分句型】（當班干會影響學習）As a class leader，we don't have much time to study．We need to help others to study．And we need to spend a lot of time keeping order．Then there is not much time for ourselves．（當班干就不會有足夠時間學習及原因）We will fall behind．（學習會掉隊）
In my opinion，being a class leader at school doesn't influence our studies．It's a good chance to improve ourselves．（我的觀點）

點評 這是一篇議論文，要求我們對最近班里同學們的一次討論結(jié)果進行描述．這次討論是關(guān)于當班干是否會影響自己的學習的，不同的學生有自己不同的看法，我們需要按照表格中的提綱，用正確的英語把這個討論結(jié)果表達出來．從表格中的提綱來看，我們的這篇作文應(yīng)主要有三部分的內(nèi)容，一是樂觀的同學們的觀點以及他們的理由；二是擔心者的同學們的觀點和他們的理由；最后是自己的觀點，這部分內(nèi)容是開放的，我們可以自由發(fā)揮．因此，寫作時我們可以根據(jù)這三部分內(nèi)容劃分出層次．同時注意語句的連貫和表達的準確和流暢．