Question

假如你是“東北虎保護協(xié)會”會員，請你以東北虎的名義寫一封給人類的公開信，呼吁人類保護東北虎。信的內(nèi)容包括：
你們大量砍伐森林，我們的食物減少，居住地縮小；
你們大量捕殺我們，用虎骨制藥、虎皮制衣；
希望你們采取措施來保護我們，擴大老虎保護區(qū)，禁止捕獵；
讓老虎和人類和平相處。
Dear Man,
I’m a tiger in the northeast of China. I’d like to have a talk with you. We lived in the forest happily for thousands of years, and then you came! And now we are in danger.

Answer 1

Dear Man,
I’m a tiger in the northeast of China. I’d like to have a talk with you. We lived in the forest happily for thousands of years, and then you came! And now we are in danger.
You cut a large number of forests, so we have no food to eat and no where to live.
You hunt and kill us. You make medicine out of our bones and make clothes out of our fur.
I hope you can take action to protect us from being killed. You can make our tiger reserve bigger and sop hunters from hunting.
Let’s live together peacefully and happily.

試題分析: 這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作，寫一封公開信。本題給出的材料較為詳細，我們首先要人稱閱讀材料，確定時態(tài)，句式和關(guān)鍵單詞等問題，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱和第二人稱，時態(tài)問題較為復雜，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。
點評：做英語書面表達時，要注意認真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達的條理性，用好連接詞。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后多讀多修改，我想一定會寫出滿意的文章來。