Question

假如你們學校要開展“創(chuàng)建和諧校園（to build a harmonious campus）”活動，請根據(jù)提示寫一篇倡議書，號召大家為創(chuàng)建和諧校園而努力。要求：80詞左右（短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）
提示：1、努力學習，參加課外活動；2、友愛互助，尊敬師長；3、愛護花草樹木，不隨地亂扔廢棄物。
Our school is like our home. We should try to build up a harmonious campus.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          

Answer 1

One possible version:
Our school is like our home. We should try to build up a harmonious campus.
First of all, the students in our school should work hard at our lessons. After school, we’d better take an active part in all kinds of activities to help improve our health and study.
Then we should be friendly to one another. We should respect our teachers and get on well with our classmates.
Thirdly, it is our duty to keep the school yard clean and tidy. We shouldn’t throw wastes around or pick flowers.
Please do our best to make our school beautiful.

這是一篇命題作文，就創(chuàng)建和諧校園，寫一封倡議書。寫作中注意不能遺漏提示中的要點，適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時要注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性。結合材料可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，第一人稱。寫作中適當使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。