Question

11．在家庭里、在社會中，只要我們從自身做起，我們的行為就可以為實(shí)現(xiàn)和諧社會（harmonious society）起到推進(jìn)作用．你們學(xué)校的English Newsletter正在以Doing Our Part（從自身做起）為題舉行征文活動，請根據(jù)下列表格提示的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇征文．

	行為	作用
在家庭里	（1）幫助父母做家務(wù)事 （2）和父母多交流	（1）讓父母不要太累 （2）…
在社會中	（1）不亂扔垃圾 （2）… （3）…	（1）使環(huán)境美化 （2）… （3）…

展望：如果我們每個(gè)人…
要求：
1詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)．
2征文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．

Doing Our Part
We have grown up and it's time for us to do something for our family and society．
At home，we should help our parents do the housework．They go to work during the daytime and they must be tired after a full day's work．We do the house in order to let them have a rest．We should also talk with them more，it can help us understand each other better．
In society，do not throw rubbish everywhere，we should throw it into the dustbin．It can make our environment more beautiful．Don't use plastic bags when going shopping，we'd better use shopping baskets．If we use them too often，it will become white pollution．
In a word，if each of us do our part from now on，our world will become a harmonious society．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是以Doing Our Part為題說說自己在日常生活中的應(yīng)該做的文明行為．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1在家庭里（1）行為；幫助父母做家務(wù)事；和父母多交流（2）作用：讓父母不要太累…
2在社會中：（1）行為：不亂扔垃圾…；（2）作用：使環(huán)境美化…
3我的展望
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
in order to  為了…
let sb do sth 讓某人做某事
talk with sb 與某人交流
throw…into…扔進(jìn)…
【高分句型】
1．They go to work①during the daytime and they ②must be tired after a full day's work．
①during  在…期間
②must be表示肯定猜測．

2．We do the housework①in order to ②let them have a rest．
①in order to  為了…，做目的狀語．
②let sb do sth 讓某人做某事；have a rest 休息
3．Don't use plastic bags ①when going shopping，②we'd better use shopping baskets．
 ①when going shopping是省略句，完整表達(dá)when we go shopping．
②had better do sth 最好做某事

解答 Doing Our Part
We have grown up and it's time for us to do something for our family and society．
At home，we should help our parents do the housework．（幫助父母做家務(wù)事）They go to work during the daytime and they must be tired after a full day's work．【高分句型】We do the housework in order to let them have a rest．【高分句型】（讓父母不要太累）We should also talk with them more，（和父母多交流）it can help us understand each other better．（幫助彼此了解）
In society，do not throw rubbish everywhere，we should throw it into the dustbin．（不亂扔垃圾）It can make our environment more beautiful．（使環(huán)境美化）Don't use plastic bags when going shopping，we'd better use shopping baskets．【高分句型】（購物自帶購物袋）If we use them too often，it will become white pollution．（塑料袋會形成白色污染）
In a word，if each of us do our part from now on，our world will become a harmonious society．（展望）

點(diǎn)評 這是一篇給材料作文．是說說日常生活中的文明行為，此類題目常考，課下多總結(jié)一些固定句式和短語．注意時(shí)態(tài)語的搭配及主謂一致問題．寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．