Question

春節(jié)就要到了，通常你在春節(jié)前會(huì)和媽媽一起出去購(gòu)物。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提供的信息，完成一篇英語(yǔ)短文。請(qǐng)注意要語(yǔ)句連貫，條理清楚，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。字?jǐn)?shù)60-70字左右，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。      

	what  to   buy	where   to    buy
going shopping	some orange juice…	a food shop
	some vegetables and fruit, no sweet snacks	…
	a pretty pink coat	…
	something else…	…
reasons(原因)	buy some… because we like\hate them. be good \ bad for health…
	look for a pink coat this year because it matches…

My mother and I usually go shopping together for Chinese New Year.
We buy something to drink and eat in a food shop. _____________________________
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Answer 1

My mother and I usually go shopping together for Chinese New Year.
We buy something to drink and eat in a food shop. We would like to buy some orange juice because they are good for our health. And we also buy some vegetables and fruit, because all my family members like eating them. But we don’t buy any sweet snacks because we don’t like them.
We often buy some new clothes in a clothes shop. I am looking for a pink coat this year, because the colour matches my new trousers well.
I always buy some books in a bookshop, too，because I like reading books. They are interesting.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。結(jié)合所給材料，介紹春節(jié)的事情。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題和一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：We would like to buy……，I always buy some books in a bookshop, too，because I like reading books.等句式的應(yīng)用。寫(xiě)作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫(xiě)作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文簡(jiǎn)明、扼要地闡明了“我”和家人在春節(jié)期間活動(dòng)的基本信息，并且并包含了圖表中所列舉的全部信息，并且用了一些連詞如：and及because等。提醒學(xué)生注意積累短語(yǔ)及句式并要會(huì)使用準(zhǔn)確，做到條理清晰，有條不紊，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的英語(yǔ)范文。