Question

4．親愛的同學(xué)們，中考過后將迎來愉快的暑假．你一定對旅行感興趣吧？請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文，介紹一下你的旅行計劃．（可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）
1．與父母乘火車去北京；
2．想瀏覽哪些風(fēng)景名勝；
3．其他打算…
4．將會有何收獲．
可能用到的詞語：capital，symbol，the Great Wall，The Palace Museum，Tian'anmen，Square，Beijing Duck…
注意：文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實姓名、校名和老師名，否則不給分．
Summer vacation is coming soon．I'm going to Beijing，the capital of China with my parents．We'll go there by train so that we can enjoy the scenery along the way．We'll visit the Great Wall first because it's symbol of our country．After that I'll go to Tian'anmen Square，the Palace Museum and so on．Of course，I must enjoy Beijing Duck．During the trip，I will take a lot of photos．
I believe I'll have a wonderful trip．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是介紹一下你的暑假旅行計劃．時態(tài)主要為一般將來時．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．與父母乘火車去北京；
2．想瀏覽哪些風(fēng)景名勝；
3．其他打算…
4．將會有何收獲．
常用到的重點短語：
be going to  打算…
and so on 等等
of course 當(dāng)然
take photos照相
【高分句型】
1．We'll go there by train so that we can enjoy the scenery along the way．
so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句．
2．We'll visit the Great Wall first because it's symbol of our country．
because 引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句
3．I believe I'll have a wonderful trip．
 believe后省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句．

解答 Summer vacation is coming soon．I'm going to Beijing，the capital of China with my parents．We'll go there by train so that we can enjoy the scenery along the way【高分句型】（與父母乘火車去北京）．We'll visit the Great Wall first because it's symbol of our country．【高分句型】After that I'll go to Tian'anmen Square，the Palace Museum and so on．（瀏覽哪些風(fēng)景名勝）Of course，I must enjoy Beijing Duck．During the trip，I will take a lot of photos．（其他打算）
    I believe I'll have a wonderful trip．【高分句型】（將會有何收獲）

點評 這是一篇提綱作文．是要求介紹一下自己的暑假計劃，時態(tài)比較單一，一般將來時，考生在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容．盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容，避免使用無把握或偏、難句型．注意所寫句子要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．