18.假如你是李華,和美國(guó)朋友Peter學(xué)習(xí)互助.他寫信給你,提到他最近學(xué)習(xí)中文取得的進(jìn)步和遇到的困難.請(qǐng)你回信給他些建議,并談?wù)勀阌⒄Z學(xué)習(xí)的困惑.信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括:
1.克服中文困難的建議.2.目前英文學(xué)習(xí)的困難.3.表達(dá)愿望.
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫.3.給出的部分不計(jì)入詞數(shù).
Dear Peter,
I?m glad to receive your letter,from which I learn you've made great progress in learning Chinese.(高分句型一)Not only can you speak more Chinese than before,but you've been able to catch some TV programs in Chinese.(高分句型二)
And I'm informed that you have some difficulty reading Chinese.Personally,you should learn and memorize more Chinese characters.Besides,you should choose some simpler articles.
As for my English,I'm faced with a new problem.From Book 6,the new words and texts in each module double those in the previous textbooks.Ihope you can give me some advice on how to deal with it,and that your reading will improve greatly soon.(高分句型三)
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua.

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息假如你是李華,和美國(guó)朋友Peter學(xué)習(xí)互助.他寫信給你,提到他最近學(xué)習(xí)中文取得的進(jìn)步和遇到的困難.請(qǐng)你回信給他些建議,并談?wù)勀阌⒄Z學(xué)習(xí)的困惑,寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點(diǎn)包括:克服中文困難的建議.目前英文學(xué)習(xí)的困難.表達(dá)愿望.2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):make great progress取得巨大進(jìn)步;Not only,but (also)不僅,而且;Personally就…個(gè)人而言;Besides另外;As for至于;be faced with 面對(duì);deal with 應(yīng)對(duì),處理;
I'm glad to receive your letter,from which I learn you've made great progress in learning Chinese.(高分句型一)
Not only can you speak more Chinese than before,but you've been able to catch some TV programs in Chinese.(高分句型二)
I hope you can give me some advice on how to deal with it,and that your reading will improve greatly soon.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Peter,
       I'm glad to receive your letter,from which I learn you've made great progress in learning Chinese.(高分句型一)Not only can you speak more Chinese than before,but you've been able to catch some TV programs in Chinese.(高分句型二)
       And I'm informed that you have some difficulty reading Chinese.Personally,you should learn and memorize more Chinese characters.Besides,you should choose some simpler articles.
       As for my English,I'm faced with a new problem.From Book 6,the new words and texts in each module double those in the previous textbooks.I hope you can give me some advice on how to deal with it,and that your reading will improve greatly soon.(高分句型三)(106words)
       Best wishes.
                                                                                                      Yours,
                                                                                                      Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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