Question

Section E (25 marks)

注意：1.詞數(shù)120詞左右；
2.文章中不出現(xiàn)真實(shí)班級和姓名；
3.可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。
Dear Li Hua，
How is everything？
I have been studying Chinese art these days， and I learnt that there is a traditional comedy called crosstalk in China. I don’t quite understand what it is. When and where did it start？ Are there any different forms of crosstalk performances？ If it isn’t too much trouble for you， I’d love to know some information about famous performers as well.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly，
Mike

Answer 1

Dear Mike,
I am glad to know that you are studying Chinese art. As a traditional form of Chinese comedy, crosstalk is really worth studying.
You asked me about the origin of crosstalk . Crosstalk started in Beijing Qing Dynasty, and can be performed by one person, two people or more. The performers of crosstalk usually try to amuse the audience by singing,talking, and telling jokes, which is similar to western stand-up.
As for the famous crosstalk performers, one of the well-known crosstalk artists is Zhu Shaowen, whose master is Ma Sanli, who was born in a crosstalk famlily. Besides, quite a few famous artists are still active on stage, among whom are Jiang Kun, Feng Gong and Niu Qun.
I hope my letter can be of help. If you want to know about Chinese crosstalk, feel free to e-mail me.
Yours truly,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查半開放性作文寫作,這篇書面表達(dá)給了一封來信，要點(diǎn)是隱含在信中，考生首先要仔細(xì)讀信的內(nèi)容，特別注意信中的問題，也就是要交代的要點(diǎn)，但是內(nèi)容還要考生自己拓展。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。寫作時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點(diǎn)組織成一個完整的整體。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中出現(xiàn)了一些高級短語：be worth doing “值得做”，be of help“有幫助”， feel free to“隨便做”，句式上文中出現(xiàn)多處定語從句， The performers of crosstalk usually try to amuse the audience by singing,talking, and telling jokes, which is similar to western stand-up. As for the famous crosstalk performers, one of the well-known crosstalk artists is Zhu Shaowen, whose master is Ma Sanli, who was born in a crosstalk famlily. quite a few famous artists are still active on stage, among whom are Jiang Kun, Feng Gong and Niu Qun. 范文還使用了Besides,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。