假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2．只允許修改10處，多者 （從第11處起） 不計分。
In recent years many flowers shops have been appeared in our small town. It is common for people to buy flowers when they go to a gathering, visiting a sick friend, or attend a wedding or birthday party. I still remember clear one day last year when Tom, a disabled student, presented some flowers to his mother to express his gratitude for her. He owing his entire life to his mother’s kind and care. With her he would not have had the confidence or the courage to fight his disability. As a result the great effort he has made, he was finally admitted to a key university


【小題1】flowers改為flower
【小題2】been去掉
【小題3】visiting改為visit
【小題4】 clear改為clearly
【小題5】for改為to
【小題6】owing改為owed
【小題7】kind改為kindness
【小題8】with改為without
【小題9】result后面加of
【小題10】has改為had

解析試題分析：在短文改錯時要中注意句子中人稱和數(shù)是否一致，時態(tài)是否一致。各種詞性之間的區(qū)別以及一些常用句型，固定短語的應用。一般的這類題型不會出現(xiàn)太復雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考查的就是我們的基礎知識。平時應注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結(jié)構(gòu)。
【小題1】flowers改為flower 本句是名詞作定語修飾名詞。Flower修飾shop。Many后面的復數(shù)形式是shops。
【小題2】been去掉。動詞appear沒有被動語態(tài)形式，一直都使用主動語態(tài)的形式。
【小題3】visiting改為visit 本句是三個動作的并列，go to…和visit以及attend三個是并列結(jié)構(gòu)。
【小題4】 clear改為clearly 用副詞clearly修飾動詞remember。Clear只是形容詞，不能修飾動詞。
【小題5】for改為to 固定搭配express sth to sb向某人表達sth。
【小題6】owing改為owed 本句中需要的是謂語動詞，這部分內(nèi)容敘述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，所以使用過去時。
【小題7】 kind改為kindness 前面是所有格mother’s后面要使用名詞。
【小題8】with改為without 根據(jù)句意：沒有她，他就不會有信心或者勇氣去戰(zhàn)勝他的殘疾。
【小題9】result后面加of 固定搭配as a result of…由于…。由于他做出的努力。
【小題10】has改為had  他做出努力是在他被大學錄取之前，他被大學錄取使用了was admitted的過去時，那么之前的事情要使用過去完成時。
考點：考察短文改錯

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