Question

【題目】假設你是李華。你的外國筆友Jane打算于七月來中國，特來信了解中國人的社交習俗。請你用英語回一封信，從以下幾個方面做具體介紹：

1．見面時的問候方式；

2．對贊美的回答方式；

3．接收禮物時的回應方式；

4．餐宴禮節(jié)。

注意：1.詞數：150詞左右。信的開頭和結束語已為你寫好(不計入總詞數)；

2.可根據內容要點適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫。

Dear Jane，

Glad to hear from you and you're welcome to China in July.______________________________________

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I hope what's mentioned above might be helpful and wish you a good journey.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear_Jane，

Glad_to_hear_from_you_and_you're_welcome_to_China_in_July.The following are some Chinese customs.

Firstly，we greet each other by saying “Hello” or asking such questions as “Where are you going？” or “Are you busy？” to express our care.Secondly，when praised，we reply with “Oh，no！”or “I'm overpraised.” to show good manners.Next，when receiving a gift，we usually say “It's unnecessary”besides “Thanks” to show politeness and then put it away.Finally，at dinner parties，we talk loudly and touch glasses when drinking to someone's health or success to show that we're warm.

Anyhow，different cultures，different customs.If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome”，you'll enjoy more of your stay here.

I_hope_what's_mentioned_above_might_be_helpful_and_wish_you_a_good_journey.

Yours_sincerely，

Li_Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一種常規(guī)的書信體提綱式作文，要點有四，學生只要把四個要點用恰當的語言，條理的句子，合適的句式，表達完整，注意過渡和復雜句使用即可。另外，在寫作時要注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用。

【亮點說明】

本文是一封常見的書信，格式正確，語言簡練，文中使用高級句子。when praised，we reply with “Oh，no！”or “I'm overpraised.” to show good mannerswhen+過去分詞做時間狀語；when receiving a gift，we usually say “It's unnecessary”besides “Thanks” to show politenesswhen+現在分詞做時間狀語；If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome”，you'll enjoy more of your stay here.i條件句和言語的結合堪稱完美；另外，Firstly，Next，Finally，Anyhow，的運用為文章增色添彩。