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Dear classmates,
I know that most of us are depressed because we haven’t got used to the high school life. I want to share my ideas about it.
Due to heavier burden of study, greater exam pressure and higher expectation from parents, many students feel troubled. To escape from these, some students become addicted to playing computer games. What is worse, some even begin to smoke or drink. They don’t have a strong desire to study and their study has no good result.
In my opinion, when we get into difficulties, we should learn how to deal with them properly. Therefore, it is necessary for us to communicate more with our classmates. Besides, we should ask our teachers and parents for advice more often. At the same time, we can relax ourselves and increase our confidence by listening to music and taking exercise.
I hope all of you can benefit from my advice.
Thank you for listening!
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