Question

假定你是中學(xué)生李華。美國(guó)一個(gè)中學(xué)校長(zhǎng)代表團(tuán)即將訪問(wèn)你校并出席英語(yǔ)周的一項(xiàng)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)和寫(xiě)作要求寫(xiě)一篇?dú)g迎詞。
寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1.表示對(duì)客人的歡迎；
2.介紹此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)（如活動(dòng)目的、內(nèi)容等）；
3.表達(dá)對(duì)客人的祝愿。
寫(xiě)作要求： 
1.詞數(shù)不少于100；
2.稱呼已經(jīng)給出，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)歡迎詞正文；
3.不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
Dear American guests,
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Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear American Guest,
On behalf of our school, I would like to express our warm welcome to you. We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week Activities.
As scheduled, we have English Talent Show today. The purpose of this program is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking. The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story telling and so on. The Show will begin at two o’clock this afternoon at the Student Centre. Dear guests, you are welcome to take part in some activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence.
I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡(jiǎn)單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫(xiě)作要求和寫(xiě)作目的。考生在寫(xiě)作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，要求是對(duì)美國(guó)代表團(tuán)的歡迎詞，所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)�？忌�成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意：1. 結(jié)構(gòu)上：采用三段成文，第一段歡迎美國(guó)朋友的到來(lái)；第二段介紹英語(yǔ)周的活動(dòng)；第三段表達(dá)愿望：希望獲準(zhǔn)。2. 時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；3. 人稱：第一人稱；4. 注意恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞，使文章自然、流暢。5. 適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯以提高作文檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如on behalf of，As scheduled， consist of， benefit from等等；還運(yùn)用了不定式to have作狀語(yǔ)，to develop作表語(yǔ)等，動(dòng)名詞listening等作賓語(yǔ)，hope后賓語(yǔ)從句等等。