Question

【題目】第二節(jié) 書面表達（滿分25分）

下圖描述了一種令家長和老師擔憂的現象，部分學生（甚至是即將面臨高考的學生）在學習過程中，為了不費精力腦力地完成作業(yè)而利用網絡抄襲的現象。請根據你對該圖的理解寫一篇英語短文，詞數120左右。內容包括（可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫）：

（1）簡要闡述圖片反映的現象； （2）分析造成該現象的原因（至少兩點）； （3）提出自己的看法。

Answer 1

【答案】The Internet has long been regarded as a wonderful tool that allows students to gain insight to useful resources and information. However, this is not always the case.

As is vividly shown in the picture, a boy is happy with the fact that he can depend on the Internet to finish tasks without any difficulty. It mirrors a common phenomenon. Nowadays, students tend to make use of the Internet to gain information they need.

There are some reasons accounting for it. To begin with, students find it convenient to surf the Internet for useful information, where problems can be solved with the help of several clicks. What’s more, there’s no doubt that the pressure to succeed also causes students to turn to computers for accurate answers. As a result, it’s likely that students will lose interest in studying, which is not beneficial to their overall development.

In my opinion, measures must be taken to solve the problem. Firstly, it is vital that students gain confidence in themselves and their abilities while doing tasks. Besides, what teachers and parents should do is encouraging students to be creative. Finally, doing tasks independently is of great significance.

【解析】范文涵蓋了題目所有要點內容，主題明確、行文連貫、邏輯性較強、語言流暢。段落安排合理，第一段直接切入主題；第二段、第三段、第四段按照要點分段。范文應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯，如定語從句as a wonderful tool that（第一段）、As is vividly shown in the picture,（第二段）、, where problems， which is not beneficial（第三段）；名詞性從句the fact that（第二段）、what teachers and parents should do is （第四段）；there’s no doubt that等等。全文結構緊湊，層次分明。To begin with,What’s more, In my opinion, Firstly， Besides ，Finally,等詞語的運用，使全文條理清晰。