Question

高三學(xué)子要經(jīng)歷各種各樣的考試，在考試中難免會(huì)遇到失利，這給同學(xué)們?cè)斐闪撕艽蟮睦�擾。最近，你們?cè)谟⒄Z(yǔ)課上就考試失利這個(gè)問(wèn)題展開(kāi)了討論，請(qǐng)陳述討論的結(jié)果。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1. 考試失利的好處（兩點(diǎn)）；
2. 考試失利的弊端（兩點(diǎn)）；
3. 你應(yīng)對(duì)考試失利的做法。
注意：
1. 短文必須包括所列內(nèi)容；        
2. 詞數(shù)120左右；
3. 文章標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已給出。
Failure in exams
As we all know, Senior Three students will experience various exams and it is hard to avoid failures sometimes, which greatly upset them.
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Answer 1

Failure in exams
As we all know, Senior Three students will experience various exams and it is hard to avoid failures sometimes, which greatly upset them. Recently, our class had a heated discussion about failure in exams. Here are the results.
We all agree that there are both advantages and disadvantages of failing in the exam. Generally speaking, it is widely believed that there are several positive aspects as follows. To begin with, it reminds students to devote themselves more to their studies. In addition, it helps students realize what aspect they are weak in, thus leading them to improve.
However, some disadvantages may arise from failure in exams. Firstly, it ruins students’ self-confidence so badly that some of them even no longer study hard. And secondly, teachers and parents show their dissatisfaction with these students, which makes the matter worse.
Faced with failures in exams, what I usually do is to turn to my teachers for help. They will always analyze my problems and give me some advice on how to deal with them. Their comfort and encouragement means so much to me.

試題分析：題目要求寫(xiě)一篇討論考試失利的利弊的作文，寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，可以從三方面來(lái)寫(xiě)，第一部分論述失利的好處，第二部分討論失利的弊端，第三部分寫(xiě)自己應(yīng)對(duì)失利的做法。作文必須包含所有的要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)在120左右，開(kāi)頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。注意使用第一人稱(chēng)，正確使用語(yǔ)法和時(shí)態(tài)，不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文使用了定語(yǔ)從句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等語(yǔ)法知識(shí)：定語(yǔ)從句As we all know，which greatly upset them，which makes the matter worse；固定句型it is hard to avoid failures sometimes；賓語(yǔ)從句agree that there are both advantages and disadvantages of failing in the exam，what aspect they are weak in；主語(yǔ)從句it is widely believed that there are several positive aspects as follows，what I usually do；狀語(yǔ)從句so badly that some of them even no longer study hard；非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞thus leading them to improve，F(xiàn)aced with failures in exams等，語(yǔ)法的熟練運(yùn)用給作文增色不少；
范文注意使用Recently，Generally speaking，To begin with，However，F(xiàn)irstly，And secondly等銜接上下文，使作文顯得結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、層次分明；
范文還使用了一些短語(yǔ)和固定搭配：arise from，devote ...to，turn to ...for help，how to deal with them等，豐富了作文的內(nèi)容。