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刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

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2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Life is a long journey during that you are to experience ups and downs. Only by hold a proper attitude will you be able to control the unexpected in life. What happens years ago is still fresh in my mind. When Dad was out of work, my family got into poor. The tough situation left me in low spirit. However, Mom stayed calm, working hardly in the field as usual. Whenever I complained on our difficulty, she always comforted me, “Don’t lose your heart. Everything will be OK!” Then came the news Dad found another well-paid job. The experience taught me what important it is to be optimistic when in trouble.

1.during that---during which

2.hold---holding

3.happens---happened

4.poor---poverty

5.spirit---spirits

6.hardly---hard

7.complained on---complained about

8.your heart去掉your

9.Dad前加that

10.what important---how important

【解析】

試題分析:題目主要考查學(xué)生對固定短語、副詞、時態(tài)、定語從句、同位語從句、感嘆句等知識的掌握情況。學(xué)生需要熟練掌握定語從句、名詞性從句等語法知識,還需要注意對時態(tài)的考查。

1.考查定語從句。定語從句的引導(dǎo)詞可以轉(zhuǎn)換為“介詞+which/whom”,先行詞journey指時間,介詞during后應(yīng)該用which,意為“在生命的過程中”,故把during that改為during which。

2.考查固定搭配。by通過,是介詞,后跟動名詞,故把hold改為holding。

3.考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)“years ago”可知,這里指的是多年前發(fā)生的事情,應(yīng)該用一般過去時,故把happens改為happened。

4.考查詞形轉(zhuǎn)換。poor是形容詞,介詞into后需要用名詞,poverty貧困,貧窮,是名詞,故把poor改為poverty。

5.考查固定短語。in low spirits情緒低落,精神不振,是固定短語,故把spirit改為spirits。

6.考查副詞。hard作副詞時意為“努力地,辛苦地,猛烈地,困難地”,hardly意為“幾乎不”,work hard努力工作,故把hardly改為hard。

7.考查動詞短語。complain about sth抱怨......,故把complained on改為complained about。

8.考查固定短語。lose heart灰心喪氣,中間不需要物主代詞,故把your去掉。

9.考查同位語從句。news后跟that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句,對news進行補充說明,that引導(dǎo)同位語從句不能省略,故在Dad前加that。

10.考查感嘆句。引導(dǎo)感嘆句時,what后跟名詞,how后跟形容詞或副詞,這里修飾形容詞important,故把what important改為how important。

考點:考查固定短語;副詞;時態(tài);定語從句;同位語從句;感嘆句

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