Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文，文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線劃掉；

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞。 2.只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。

In the summer holiday, we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there. It’s a long and bored journey. But the moment I arrived, I fall in love with the city. It’s such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue. If you walk along the coast, you can feel the wind to blowing on your face. The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship. You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted. Moreover, I think the driver there drive too fast in the street. You can never be too carefully when crossing the street.

Answer 1

1.把paid visit中間加上a

2.把bored 改為boring

3.把fall改為f ell

4.把such改為so

5.把cleaning改為clean

6.把wind后面去掉to

7.把far改為long

8.把moreover改為however

9.把driver改為drivers

10.把careless改為careful

【解析】

1. visit中間加上a；第一句we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there.，visit為可數(shù)名詞，需加數(shù)量詞，故加a

2. 改為boring；第二句It’s a long and bored journey. Bored “無(wú)聊的，無(wú)趣的，煩人的”。通常用來(lái)形容人的感受。Boring“無(wú)聊的，無(wú)趣的； 令人厭煩的”，用來(lái)形容物給人的感覺。這里是形容這次旅行既漫長(zhǎng)又無(wú)聊，故把bored 改為boring

3. the moment I arrived, I fall in love with the city. 前面用arrived可知時(shí)態(tài)是過(guò)去式，后面fall也應(yīng)該用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。故把fall改為fell

4. such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.so和such修飾名詞的結(jié)構(gòu)是這樣的：so + adj + a/an + n（可數(shù)），such+（a/an） n +adj 這里先接的是beautiful。要用so，句意：這是一個(gè)如此美麗的城市以至于我?guī)缀跽也坏饺魏我粋�(gè)詞來(lái)形容它。故把such改為so

5. 整齊的。第五句The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue. 句意：街道是干凈的，天空是藍(lán)色的。故把cleaning改為clean

6. you walk along the coast, you can feel the wind to blowing on your face. blowing on your face是用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)。句意：如果你沿著海岸線行走，你會(huì)感覺到風(fēng)吹著你的臉。故把wind后面去掉to。

7. fas as只要；遠(yuǎn)到…； 直到…為止，多表示程度范圍達(dá)到。As long as只要； 如果； 既然； 由于。多表示條件滿足，達(dá)到。第八句You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted. 句意：只要被允許，你也可以去釣魚。故把far改為long

8.adv.再者； 此外； 而且； 同時(shí)。However adv.不管到什么程度； 無(wú)論如何； 然而。第九句Moreover, I think the driver there drive too fast in the street. 句意：然而，我覺得那兒的街上開車的司機(jī)開得太快了。故把moreover改為however

9. I think the driver there drive too fast in the street. Driver是可數(shù)名詞，應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式。句意：然而，我覺得那兒的街上開車的司機(jī)開得太快了。故把driver改為drivers

10. adj.粗心的； 無(wú)憂無(wú)慮的； 漫不經(jīng)心的；careful adj.仔細(xì)的，小心的； 周到的。第十句You can never be too carefully when crossing the street.句意：過(guò)馬路的時(shí)候，你在小心都不為過(guò)。故把careless改為careful

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